Bring To Life- the Clothes Peg

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It lies with it's kin in the bag they live in, collectively known as a 'float',
not quite sure why that's so but there's one thing I know
and that's they've never been near a boat.
They hustle and clatter , skins not coated in batter, in different hues, green, yellow, red,
there's a blue one, poor thing with a twisted wire spring
that's unused, I assume that he's dead.
From a hook under the stairs they will come out in pairs
although sometimes they will hunt in threes
when bedsheets they attack, or their jaws may just crack
as it fights them all off in the breeze.
If encountering a red one, for sure, you're a dead one,
it nips at your fingers and toes,
and when the timing is right it's a horrible sight on the tip of a young child's nose.
I can honestly state that they sometimes migrate
not a lot, since they always get caught,
but please take it from me, that I can guarantee on washdays you are always one short.

11th April 2018
For contest 'Bring to life', sponsor Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/11/2018 2:27:00 PM
Well done Mr Viv for some reasonb POTD seems to give poems the kiss of death as the poem I submitted also got POTD but didn't place in the best sonnets contest lol:-) so glad to see this on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/11/2018 6:03:00 AM
Ooh I remember this fabulous piece! So glat to see it on the winners list! Joy :) xomo
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Date: 5/10/2018 10:46:00 PM
A fun poem, Viv. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:35:00 PM
I'll never be able to look at a clothes peg again without thinking of you Viv - Lindsay
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Date: 4/18/2018 9:11:00 AM
Quite imaginative! An enjoyable bite of a read! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 4/15/2018 7:23:00 AM
You take the mundane and make it very special, sir! You have something very special. Although I know you are humble and will deny it, you are a fantastic poet and those of us who get to read your work are laughing, smiling, and in thought. We love to go to the places you take us!
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Date: 4/14/2018 8:15:00 PM
Viv, a clever, creative and humorous poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honors with your entertaining and whimsical write.. Warmest wishes!
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Date: 4/14/2018 5:39:00 PM
I am SO glad that the PT team made this great poem POTD, Viv! It SHOULD have easily placed in the contest...!!
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Date: 4/14/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I didn't notice my line count was one over until the contest closed, so I'm guessing that was why. Viv x
Date: 4/14/2018 10:29:00 AM
POTD?? YABBADABBADOO!!
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Date: 4/14/2018 6:55:00 PM
Mwah! x
Date: 4/14/2018 3:46:00 AM
May I dare say: beautiful. Congratulations on poem of the day. Kai
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:26:00 PM
Hi Viv, I agree with Connie, this is well written and very clever. I found it to be entertaining as well. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, I'm delighted that so many enjoyed it. Viv x
Date: 4/13/2018 2:33:00 PM
This is so clever and unique and hilarious Viv! I see why it was honored with POTD! Congratulations my friend. Very deserving of the honor! : )
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:55:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, very kind. I have the storm-proof clothes pegs, they deliver a nasty bite :)
Date: 4/13/2018 12:29:00 PM
What a great write Viv, feels more like a limerick, congratulations...
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:56:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, I love it when all the elements come together with little effort. Not often, butsometimes... Regards, Viv
Date: 4/13/2018 10:14:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD :)
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:57:00 AM
Thanks Eve, a delightful surprise. Viv x
Date: 4/13/2018 9:44:00 AM
That's just hilarious, so imaginative and worthy of POTD!
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:57:00 AM
Thanks, Sunlite, so glad you enjoyed it. Viv x
Date: 4/13/2018 9:08:00 AM
Outstanding :) Congrats on potd!! xomo
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:58:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen, mucho appreciato. Viv x
Date: 4/13/2018 9:07:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem very much, Viv, what a great, original idea. So much fun! Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:58:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, my imagination worries me sometimes :)
Date: 4/13/2018 5:41:00 AM
Great write Viv, I really enjoyed this type of poetry. Congrats on your POTD ...All the best ...Charlie
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Date: 4/14/2018 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Charles, always nice to raise a smile. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/13/2018 4:25:00 AM
Loved this brilliant and inspired creation my friend. Congratulations on receiving POTD with this light-hearted piece.
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Date: 4/14/2018 2:02:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I must stop eating cheese before bedtime :)
Date: 4/13/2018 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written poem Viv, thoroughly enjoyed, great rhyme and so funny and imaginative, brilliant. :))
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Date: 4/14/2018 2:01:00 AM
Thanks, Roy, good fun composing it, too. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/13/2018 4:09:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...POTD! honors...well done Viv...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 4/14/2018 2:01:00 AM
Thanks, WW, will do. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/13/2018 4:04:00 AM
Well that's fun. Thanks.
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Date: 4/14/2018 2:00:00 AM
Thanks Lisle, appreciate it. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/13/2018 4:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2018 2:55:00 AM
Many many congrats on POTD Mr Viv, hope this gives you good reason to smile:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 4/14/2018 2:00:00 AM
Cheeeeeeeese! x
Date: 4/13/2018 2:50:00 AM
Congratulations Viv on POTD. TOM.
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Tom, made my day. regards, Viv
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