Bring To Life- the Clothes Peg

When Crocodiles shoal in a watering hole they're collectively known as a 'float',
why not include clothes pegs, (though you won't lose a leg
and they never been near a boat)
They hustle and clatter , skins not coated in batter, in different hues, green, yellow, red,
there's a blue one, poor thing with a twisted wire spring
that's unused, I assume that he's dead.
From a bag under the stairs they will come out in pairs
although sometimes they will hunt in threes
when bedsheets they attack, though their jaws may just crack
when it fights them all off in the breeze.
If encountering a red one, for sure, you're a dead one,
it nips at your fingers and toes,
and when the timing is right it's a horrible sight on the tip of a young child's nose.
I can honestly state that they sometimes migrate
not a lot, since they always get caught,
but please, take it from me, that I can guarantee- on washdays you are always one short.

11th April 2018
For contest 'Bring to life', sponsor Shadow Hamilton
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Allison Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Well done Mr Viv for some reasonb POTD seems to give poems the kiss of death as the poem I submitted also got POTD but didn't place in the best sonnets contest lol:-) so glad to see this on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Ooh I remember this fabulous piece! So glat to see it on the winners list! Joy :) xomo
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 10:46 PM
A fun poem, Viv. Congrats on your win.
Laurie Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:35 PM
I'll never be able to look at a clothes peg again without thinking of you Viv - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Quite imaginative! An enjoyable bite of a read! Congrats on POTD!
Beaufort Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 7:23 AM
You take the mundane and make it very special, sir! You have something very special. Although I know you are humble and will deny it, you are a fantastic poet and those of us who get to read your work are laughing, smiling, and in thought. We love to go to the places you take us!
Ashley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Viv, a clever, creative and humorous poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honors with your entertaining and whimsical write.. Warmest wishes!
Leiser Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 5:39 PM
I am SO glad that the PT team made this great poem POTD, Viv! It SHOULD have easily placed in the contest...!!
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Laura, I didn't notice my line count was one over until the contest closed, so I'm guessing that was why. Viv x
Murray Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 10:29 AM
POTD?? YABBADABBADOO!!
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Mwah! x
Neumann Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 3:46 AM
May I dare say: beautiful. Congratulations on poem of the day. Kai
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Hi Viv, I agree with Connie, this is well written and very clever. I found it to be entertaining as well. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:54 AM
Thanks Alexis, I'm delighted that so many enjoyed it. Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:33 PM
This is so clever and unique and hilarious Viv! I see why it was honored with POTD! Congratulations my friend. Very deserving of the honor! : )
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Thanks, Connie, very kind. I have the storm-proof clothes pegs, they deliver a nasty bite :)
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 12:29 PM
What a great write Viv, feels more like a limerick, congratulations...
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Thanks Charlie, I love it when all the elements come together with little effort. Not often, butsometimes... Regards, Viv
Roper Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD :)
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Thanks Eve, a delightful surprise. Viv x
Wanter Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:44 AM
That's just hilarious, so imaginative and worthy of POTD!
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Thanks, Sunlite, so glad you enjoyed it. Viv x
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Outstanding :) Congrats on potd!! xomo
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:58 AM
Thanks, Maureen, mucho appreciato. Viv x
Krampe Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:07 AM
I enjoyed this poem very much, Viv, what a great, original idea. So much fun! Congrats on POTD.
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:58 AM
Thanks Agnes, my imagination worries me sometimes :)
Messina Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Great write Viv, I really enjoyed this type of poetry. Congrats on your POTD ...All the best ...Charlie
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:03 AM
Thanks Charles, always nice to raise a smile. Regards, Viv
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:25 AM
Loved this brilliant and inspired creation my friend. Congratulations on receiving POTD with this light-hearted piece.
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:02 AM
Thanks Robert, I must stop eating cheese before bedtime :)
Pett Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:11 AM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written poem Viv, thoroughly enjoyed, great rhyme and so funny and imaginative, brilliant. :))
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Thanks, Roy, good fun composing it, too. Regards, Viv
Warrior Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:09 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...POTD! honors...well done Viv...stay in the light...^WW^
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Thanks, WW, will do. Regards, Viv
Ryder Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:04 AM
Well that's fun. Thanks.
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:00 AM
Thanks Lisle, appreciate it. Regards, Viv
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:55 AM
Many many congrats on POTD Mr Viv, hope this gives you good reason to smile:-) hugs jan xxx
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:00 AM
Cheeeeeeeese! x
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:50 AM
Congratulations Viv on POTD. TOM.
Wigley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:59 AM
Thanks Tom, made my day. regards, Viv
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