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Bring On Spring

I am cold to my bones The winter this year unsettled me Freezing snow went on too long Aging stiff thoughts Overpowered my normal optimism I dream of buds bursting with life I dream of swallows making their journey I anticipate the energy of spring These thoughts warm me.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2011 11:00:00 PM

love this Liz, Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 1:40:00 PM

This sure deserves a hightest rating. Your poetry blows ME away. Luv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/15/2011 10:19:00 AM

"Thoughts" are about all we have to warm us right now in SUNNY California..today its 47* and overcast, yet again. I enjoyed your write very much..BG

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 1/15/2011 8:19:00 AM

THIS IS just a great poem

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/15/2011 7:51:00 AM

The harshness of winter can make people feel very dreary, Liz. Spring and fall are the best times of the year. Here in Florida it's the summers that seem endless. Your point is well taken in this well composed poem. Love, Carolyn