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Bring On Fall

Bring on September. Sunshine still lingers. Down from its azure sky, Sun runs long fingers over gold fields while sun’s lovers sigh knowing the affair is ended. Summertime, bye bye. Bring on October. How cool is its breeze. Poets sing praises most beautifully for the bright hues bedazzling trees. Pumpkins on porches lend festivity as kids trick-or-treating scurry with glee. Bring on November. Days now grow cold. Older now, Autumn is wearing a shawl. However, before the winter takes hold, families gather to give thanks for all - for all God has blessed us with; bring on fall. Oct. 6, 2018 Used this time for the Autumn Poetry Contest of Francine Roberts

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/29/2018 6:20:00 AM

Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/9/2018 10:28:00 PM

Beautifully describing three months of Autumn, Andrea:)

Joseph May

Date: 10/9/2018 9:01:00 PM

Very nicely penned Andrea..

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/8/2018 8:53:00 AM

Hi Andrea, such a wonderful poetic delight you lay before us. Bring on the Fall, my favourite season, Autumn sings in my soul. Such wonderful imagery paints the mind's canvas as one reads these words. I have enjoyed this read this afternoon. The words bring me peace. An excellent write Andrea. Good luck in the contest, i hope this wonderful piece does well. An Autumn fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/8/2018 7:33:00 AM

A very bright pen. Yes, "Bring on Fall!"

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2018 6:16:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem on Fall! “Sun runs long fingers over gold fields while sun’s lovers sigh” and “for the bright hues bedazzling trees”

John Gondolf

Date: 10/8/2018 4:56:00 AM

You covered the whole gamut of the fall season in this poem, nicely written, Andrea. Best of luck. John

Manoj Kumar

Date: 10/8/2018 2:10:00 AM

Beautifully written Andrea.... I was off soup for a while due to work pressures and it is such works of yours that I badly missed. Keep writing... God Bless

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/7/2018 3:51:00 PM

Oh yes, Harvest Festivals i remember those, read my first poem in public as a 9 year old,, your wonderful poem, Andrea truly inspirational to read, also takes me back to another time, another place...

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/7/2018 3:37:00 PM

Oh, I love the awesome spirit of your beautiful poem that wraps a multitude of seasonal feelings into its lovely lines. Best wishes for a win, Andrea. ~Susan

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/7/2018 12:05:00 PM

I REALLY love this, Andrea! Janice

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/6/2018 9:44:00 PM

Very nice, my absolute favorite season!!!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/6/2018 7:17:00 PM

I think it is marvelous that you brought such a uniqueness to September, October, and November, Andrea. You are wise in this.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/6/2018 6:36:00 PM

Lovely sentiments in this seasonal piece Andrea! This contest has been open quite some time, I hope it closes soon. I feel lazy today and just want to meld into poetry. : )

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/6/2018 5:43:00 PM

Great imagery Andrea..enjoyed reading your walk through the autumn months.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/6/2018 4:23:00 PM

Terrific imagery! I think my favorite part is, "Sun runs long fingers/ over gold fields while sun’s lovers sigh/ knowing the affair is ended. Summertime, bye bye." Thoroughly enjoyable read! ;)