Darren White Poet Free verse

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Edited and reposted poem from a year ago

Bring Me To Light

Can I hide in your eyes
smile in your heart
drown in your sorrows?
Can I flee in your hair
kiss your scared shoulders
crawl in your bed?

My darling, relax in me
come to my comfort
walk in my dreams.
Play with my longing
find me in darkness
bring me to light

Let us be here forever
hide here together
slowly resurface
and face day again.
Lift our heads to the sunlight
smile to the future.

Drown in my eyes
walk in my dreams.
Raise up together
in triumph resurface
And finally live
And finally live

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October 23, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White

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Scott Thirtyseven November 1, 2017 at 9:13 AM Beautiful poem mate. Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:50 AM Thanks scott :)

Chuck Melugin October 31, 2017 at 4:54 AM Darren, your pen paints a perfect relationship in the spotlight of love! My best to you, chuck Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:50 AM Thanks Chuck :)

Eve Roper October 28, 2017 at 9:42 AM Wonderful and romantic, Darren Hugs Eve ~`* Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:49 AM Thanks Eve :)

Jan Allison October 26, 2017 at 10:32 AM Such romantic lines Darren this is truly beautiful:-) I purchased my first ever civil ceremony card as our friends are having a service in england in November. The Iom is now finally allowed to have gaya marriages woo hook what progress at last:-) hugs Jan xx Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:49 AM Yeah Jan, it's about time, isn't it?

Ravi Sathasivam October 26, 2017 at 2:30 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Thanks for sharing it Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:48 AM Thanks so much Ravi

Sara Ella October 24, 2017 at 10:27 PM Beautiful Darren <3 Needs to be read aloud :) Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:48 AM Thanks Sara :)

Arthur Vaso October 24, 2017 at 9:49 PM Well well I will say the obvious, beautiful poem! Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:48 AM Love the obvious ;)

Jean Murray October 24, 2017 at 1:19 PM Oh Darren, this is a hot one. Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:47 AM Thanks Jean ;)

Pashang Salehi October 24, 2017 at 3:54 AM If I can, I give the sun, the moon and all brightness of all stars..... I live in darkness.... it is painful...beautiful write.. Darren White November 2, 2017 at 3:47 AM Thanks pashang :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 23, 2017 at 5:28 PM There is such beauty in your words, total abandonment surrendering to the bliss of love. Awesome Darren! : ) Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:25 AM Thank you so much Connie :)

Patricia Cresswell October 23, 2017 at 5:15 PM It reminds me of the songs of Solomon. I hear it being sung into the warmth and closeness of a desert night. It is beautiful! Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:25 AM that is such a beautiful part of the Bible. Thank you.

Charlie Smith October 23, 2017 at 12:59 PM Lovely Darren, Free verse at its best... Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:23 AM Thanks Charlie, the cadence makes you don't even notice it doesn't rhyme, eh?

Mike Gentile October 23, 2017 at 10:18 AM Simply beautiful, Darren. Such a stunning expression of great love.!! Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:23 AM Mike, thanks so much :)

Tim Smith October 23, 2017 at 10:11 AM In my head the answers were all yes... loving the romance Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:22 AM Thanks, one day :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 23, 2017 at 9:01 AM This is so beautiful Darren. I wish this for you. Love and hugs dear friend <3 Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:22 AM I wish it for both of us <3

Carol B. October 23, 2017 at 7:50 AM Romance oozes all through this piece. Beautiful! :) Darren White October 24, 2017 at 2:21 AM Thanks Carol :)