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Edited and reposted poem from a year ago

Can I hide in your eyes smile in your heart drown in your sorrows? Can I flee in your hair kiss your scared shoulders crawl in your bed? My darling, relax in me come to my comfort walk in my dreams. Play with my longing find me in darkness bring me to light Let us be here forever hide here together slowly resurface and face day again. Lift our heads to the sunlight smile to the future. Drown in my eyes walk in my dreams. Raise up together in triumph resurface And finally live And finally live *** October 23, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 11/1/2017 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful poem mate.
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:50:00 AM
Thanks scott :)
Date: 10/31/2017 4:54:00 AM
Darren, your pen paints a perfect relationship in the spotlight of love! My best to you, chuck
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:50:00 AM
Thanks Chuck :)
Date: 10/28/2017 9:42:00 AM
Wonderful and romantic, Darren Hugs Eve ~`*
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:49:00 AM
Thanks Eve :)
Date: 10/26/2017 10:32:00 AM
Such romantic lines Darren this is truly beautiful:-) I purchased my first ever civil ceremony card as our friends are having a service in england in November. The Iom is now finally allowed to have gaya marriages woo hook what progress at last:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:49:00 AM
Yeah Jan, it's about time, isn't it?
Date: 10/26/2017 2:30:00 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Thanks for sharing it
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Ravi
Date: 10/24/2017 10:27:00 PM
Beautiful Darren <3 Needs to be read aloud :)
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thanks Sara :)
Date: 10/24/2017 9:49:00 PM
Well well I will say the obvious, beautiful poem!
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:48:00 AM
Love the obvious ;)
Date: 10/24/2017 1:19:00 PM
Oh Darren, this is a hot one.
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Jean ;)
Date: 10/24/2017 3:54:00 AM
If I can, I give the sun, the moon and all brightness of all stars..... I live in darkness.... it is painful...beautiful write..
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Darren White
Date: 11/2/2017 3:47:00 AM
Thanks pashang :)
Date: 10/23/2017 5:28:00 PM
There is such beauty in your words, total abandonment surrendering to the bliss of love. Awesome Darren! : )
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie :)
Date: 10/23/2017 5:15:00 PM
It reminds me of the songs of Solomon. I hear it being sung into the warmth and closeness of a desert night. It is beautiful!
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:25:00 AM
that is such a beautiful part of the Bible. Thank you.
Date: 10/23/2017 12:59:00 PM
Lovely Darren, Free verse at its best...
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:23:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, the cadence makes you don't even notice it doesn't rhyme, eh?
Date: 10/23/2017 10:18:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Darren. Such a stunning expression of great love.!!
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:23:00 AM
Mike, thanks so much :)
Date: 10/23/2017 10:11:00 AM
In my head the answers were all yes... loving the romance
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:22:00 AM
Thanks, one day :)
Date: 10/23/2017 9:01:00 AM
This is so beautiful Darren. I wish this for you. Love and hugs dear friend <3
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:22:00 AM
I wish it for both of us <3
Date: 10/23/2017 7:50:00 AM
Romance oozes all through this piece. Beautiful! :)
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Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:21:00 AM
Thanks Carol :)
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