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Bring Me To Darkness

I sink, and drown in all my sorrows
Bring me to darkness where I can forget.
Grant me that privilege, let me burrow
My final resting place, my final bed.
Forget, life, every word I ever said.

"I swim in darkness", once I wrote that poem.
And still I swim, Styx's water vast and endless.
Sometimes words break through the foam
of waves crashing, sentences that press
an imprint in my wrinkled, blood soaked flesh.

No words describe the pain as much as Cocytus,
in ancient times a river filled by tears betrayed,
now howled by me, horrendous exodus,
washed away to Acheron our blood, paid
dearly by my living still, for them too late.

Oh river of fire, oh Phlegethon, you burned
My body down, my mind to ashes grey.
Make me forget this terror, let no stone unturned
To wipe my memory, please Lethe, clay
on your banks, and let me forever stay

And sink, and drown in all my sorrows
Bring me to darkness where I can forget.
Grant me that privilege, let me burrow
My final resting place, my final bed.
Forget, life, every word I ever said.

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January 28, 2017
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Liguori Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 6:38 AM
dramatic and wonderful!
Polydoro Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Such strong poem! very well writen, Darren :)
White Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Thank you my friend :)
Vaso Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 10:36 PM
If books were read backwards, we have already met at the first chapter.
White Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:19 PM
Yeah, we did, I should have numbered these two poems indeed.
Garcia Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:47 PM
As usual I find myself referencing Google to read your beautiful poetry. We should pick an upcoming day here soon to think happy thoughts and write about them. I love this poem. Well done, Sheriff
White Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Let's do that :) And then write about positive things only. They say it's therapeutic!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Intense, Darren. Reminds me of the classic poets. ie Homer
White Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:17 PM
I've explored all rivers of the Underworld to write this poem, so yeah a bit of Homer should be in there too :)
Murray Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 4:09 PM
That's heavy Darren. It must be so difficult to be in constant pain, be it physical or emotional.
White Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:16 PM
It is Jean, very much. Sometimes I like to write dark poetry, sometimes it's lighter
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