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I sink, and drown in all my sorrows Bring me to darkness where I can forget. Grant me that privilege, let me burrow My final resting place, my final bed. Forget, life, every word I ever said. "I swim in darkness", once I wrote that poem. And still I swim, Styx's water vast and endless. Sometimes words break through the foam of waves crashing, sentences that press an imprint in my wrinkled, blood soaked flesh. No words describe the pain as much as Cocytus, in ancient times a river filled by tears betrayed, now howled by me, horrendous exodus, washed away to Acheron our blood, paid dearly by my living still, for them too late. Oh river of fire, oh Phlegethon, you burned My body down, my mind to ashes grey. Make me forget this terror, let no stone unturned To wipe my memory, please Lethe, clay on your banks, and let me forever stay And sink, and drown in all my sorrows Bring me to darkness where I can forget. Grant me that privilege, let me burrow My final resting place, my final bed. Forget, life, every word I ever said. *** January 28, 2017

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Date: 1/26/2022 6:38:00 AM
dramatic and wonderful!
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Date: 1/29/2017 2:01:00 PM
Such strong poem! very well writen, Darren :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/29/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend :)
Date: 1/28/2017 10:36:00 PM
If books were read backwards, we have already met at the first chapter.
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Darren White
Date: 1/28/2017 11:19:00 PM
Yeah, we did, I should have numbered these two poems indeed.
Date: 1/28/2017 7:47:00 PM
As usual I find myself referencing Google to read your beautiful poetry. We should pick an upcoming day here soon to think happy thoughts and write about them. I love this poem. Well done, Sheriff
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Darren White
Date: 1/28/2017 11:18:00 PM
Let's do that :) And then write about positive things only. They say it's therapeutic!
Date: 1/28/2017 4:52:00 PM
Intense, Darren. Reminds me of the classic poets. ie Homer
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Darren White
Date: 1/28/2017 11:17:00 PM
I've explored all rivers of the Underworld to write this poem, so yeah a bit of Homer should be in there too :)
Date: 1/28/2017 4:09:00 PM
That's heavy Darren. It must be so difficult to be in constant pain, be it physical or emotional.
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Darren White
Date: 1/28/2017 11:16:00 PM
It is Jean, very much. Sometimes I like to write dark poetry, sometimes it's lighter

Book: Shattered Sighs