Notes About The Poem

**Inspired by one of my new favorite songs - by Sully Erna  - 'Until Then'

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fmkQg77m0o

Bring Me Home

(An interpretation of what someone could be feeling writing the song above: called:  'Until Then')

The keys play of my loneliness
The cello echoes the flow of my call
As I am lifted with pleas of what I need
From all I can or cannot do

Near or not, you are my home
I hold on tightly from afar
Your face touches my skin in the breeze
Wait for me, for I will be there

Hear my voice, as I ride the keys
I am on my way to you
Nothing is the same without you
My friend, my breath is yours

I am playing these keys to be carried
On the very same breeze back to you
Feel it on your skin, as it reaches you softly
Feel it in this song, as I sing my way to you

My soul cries for how lost I am without you
I am waiting and ready to join you
With every wave of this melody
To rise above everything with you

The strings carry us where we are meant to be
In the home of our hearts, in the home of our souls
Where our love never parts, from the past to future
For eternity to come, time will then, bring me home
               

Heidi Sands   

 11/21/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Lovely heartfelt poem, Heidi.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Warrior Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Wow...heart felt write Heidi...nicely done my friend...god bless...^WW^
Sands Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you WW. I appreciate you comment. Have a nice day today :)
One Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:59 AM
Beautiful but sad at the same time, hopefully one day you will be home..
Sands Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Hi Silent One. Thank you. I just went with words inspired by the song above and what can be felt from it :)
Michael Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Lovely in every way...Beautiful poem and message too...All the best Heidi
Sands Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Arturo, it was actually inspired by the song in my note section above, so it was another way of interpreting what he is singing :)
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Just a smashing depiction..enjoyed reading it.. a timely tribute to home for the holiday season!
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. I am happy you could visit this one. :)
May Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Beautifully penned Heidi...A journey through musical notes
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Thank you so much Joseph. I find the song very inspiring! :)
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