Bring Me Home

What I'd like to give you, is an ounce of my perfume
in hopes the familiar fragrance will remind you of me
You once told me I smell like a magnolia in full bloom
That was before your illness, neither of us did foresee

I know you thought it best that I leave you for a while
but I promised to be with you in sickness and in health
Please let me come home to you. I hate living in exile
Being with you, my love, is the measure of my wealth

My perfume is not too sweet. It will not overpower you
and has a hint of spice that keeps life from being a bore
Don't you miss me being near you?  Darling, if you do,
tell me to come back and I'll be knocking on your door

I long to hold you,  and tell you everything will be fine
Please stop shutting me out. My place is at your side
The choice you made for me to go should've been mine
Bring me home today, for our love cannot be denied



~ October 3, 2021 ~
Bring Me Home Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peck Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Jenna, You wrote a beautiful, poignant poem. Congratulations on your win!
Agustin Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 8:20 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me reflect on and smell the fragrance of my life-building commitment to the Lord. God bless you.
Rose  Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Such longing , I felt it Jenna, congrats on your win, and thanks for joining :)
Logan Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 6:01 AM
Thank you for liking it enough to honor with a placement, Mystic.
Alex Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Great Writing. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Thank you, Chris.
Koplin Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Very powerful Jenna, you have done an amazing job pouring out the emotion.
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:48 AM
I'm so glad you liked how these lines told the sad story. Thank you, Mark.
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 1:47 PM
A lot of sadness in your verse Jenna, maybe he acted with good intentions so as not to drag you down as he battled his illness. Hope you've had a good day. Tom
Logan Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 3:52 PM
Your perception would be a good explanation for the situation. Thanks. Tom.
Ball Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 1:41 PM
This is lovely and heart warming. God Bless my friend. JB
Logan Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 3:50 PM
I’m happy you enjoyed the read, Judy.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 10:03 AM
I cannot but admire your wishes. Yet if there is a deadly infection, I will have to agree with the male. :)
Logan Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 10:12 AM
I’d agreed, but not the kind of illness I had in mind. Thanks, Victor.
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