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What I'd like to give you, is an ounce of my cologne... As your wish is my command. Are you already seduced by It's sweet aroma? Your soul somersaulting with celestial bliss? Then consider it a parting gift, my dear friend, Because...because; gosh, it pains me to inform you; It's been great fun; this is probably our final goodbye, So I want you so hold on to a piece of me. The whiff of my cologne is something to always remember me by... Draw it ever so slowly into your breath; savor it While it lasts. When the sandalwood scent eventually fades, I desperately hope the seed of remembrance sown Within you sprout into a toweringly mighty redwood tree. Oh, may you never forget! Bring me home; keep me caged Inside the warm dungeon of your heart and mind! Bring Me Home Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose Date written: 09/29/2021

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Date: 9/29/2021 4:34:00 PM
That's beautiful, Edward. I especially liked the last two lines. Good luck!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2021 4:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ann:-)

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