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Brilliant Sunrise

You hold me with hot passion, bright as flames
In the clouds displaying fire in the morning sky
Elevating me to distant places my soul flies
Above and beyond all apprehension, mistrust
I want to be no-where but in your arms
If only this moment could last - forever -
We would light up the skies bright enough 
To never fade, to continuously re-ignite
One look, one touch, one breath, each moment
With every brilliant sunrise we would re-create
Endless surprises waiting to happen with fate
                    --- Together ---
Fading in whispers of "I love you" as the sun sets
                    --- Upon us ---

Heidi Sands
6/26/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Richards Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 8:14 PM
So romantic, this makes one say "ahhh".... , and creates magic for those in love ! Nicely done, Heidi !
Sands Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:46 AM
That is such a nice thing to say. Thank you Carrie :)
J.T. Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:07 PM
I really like this poem. Great job -JT
Sands Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you JT. :) I am happy you like it.
Green Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:07 AM
Such a beautiful way to start the day, your poem has provided the sunrise that this morning rains has taken from me. Thank you for sharing your wonderful vision.
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:24 AM
I am happy I could give you the sunrise you have missed, Chris. Sorry to hear about 'more' rain. The weather is up and down here very quickly lately. Thank you for the comment.
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:40 AM
ohh, i am enticed by your glowing poem, heidi... this is very good!..huggs
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Nette :)
Turner Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 9:51 PM
You keep writing poetry like this and I may have to make a road trip:) Simply beautiful, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Good morning Daniel. Thank you for your comment :) I got a laugh from the way you wrote it too !
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