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You hold me with hot passion, bright as flames In the clouds displaying fire in the morning sky Elevating me to distant places my soul flies Above and beyond all apprehension, mistrust I want to be no-where but in your arms If only this moment could last - forever - We would light up the skies bright enough To never fade, to continuously re-ignite One look, one touch, one breath, each moment With every brilliant sunrise we would re-create Endless surprises waiting to happen with fate --- Together --- Fading in whispers of "I love you" as the sun sets --- Upon us --- Heidi Sands 6/26/17

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Date: 6/27/2017 8:14:00 PM
So romantic, this makes one say "ahhh".... , and creates magic for those in love ! Nicely done, Heidi !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 7:46:00 AM
That is such a nice thing to say. Thank you Carrie :)
Date: 6/27/2017 7:07:00 PM
I really like this poem. Great job -JT
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thank you JT. :) I am happy you like it.
Date: 6/27/2017 6:07:00 AM
Such a beautiful way to start the day, your poem has provided the sunrise that this morning rains has taken from me. Thank you for sharing your wonderful vision.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2017 7:24:00 AM
I am happy I could give you the sunrise you have missed, Chris. Sorry to hear about 'more' rain. The weather is up and down here very quickly lately. Thank you for the comment.
Date: 6/27/2017 1:40:00 AM
ohh, i am enticed by your glowing poem, heidi... this is very good!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2017 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Nette :)
Date: 6/26/2017 9:51:00 PM
You keep writing poetry like this and I may have to make a road trip:) Simply beautiful, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2017 7:21:00 AM
Good morning Daniel. Thank you for your comment :) I got a laugh from the way you wrote it too !

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