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Brilliant State

As I laid there in the calm sea of a deep, deep sleep My mind traveled and placed me in a theatre seat Where sweet visions were playing on the screen Luminous, shimmering colors were resplendently seen I arose from my seat and danced in the glorious atmosphere Stars dripped from the sky, similar to silk covering me everywhere Gently did I awaken, fluttering... my eyes began to open Sadly, I wished I could have stayed in that brilliant state more often. ©Holly P. Moore November 2012

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Date: 11/21/2012 11:15:00 AM
Holly I like the new title, great poem...David
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:31:00 AM
Holly really good poem for the form exactly as it should be...david
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:18:00 AM
this beautiful poem, reads to me like a 'Dennis Potter' penny from heaven movie... it is so relaxing to read so serene...........
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