Brilliant State

As I laid there in the calm sea of a deep, deep sleep 
My mind traveled and placed me in a theatre seat 
Where sweet visions were playing on the screen 
Luminous, shimmering colors were resplendently seen
I arose from my seat and danced in the glorious atmosphere
Stars dripped from the sky, similar to silk covering me everywhere
Gently did I awaken, fluttering... my eyes began to open
Sadly, I wished I could have stayed in that brilliant state more often.

©Holly P. Moore
   November 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Holly I like the new title, great poem...David
Williams Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:31 AM
Holly really good poem for the form exactly as it should be...david
Horsman Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:18 AM
this beautiful poem, reads to me like a 'Dennis Potter' penny from heaven movie... it is so relaxing to read so serene...........
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