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Brilliant Beauty

Audrey Carey #0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson Raw energy.... Brilliant beauty rides the skies Quick as the wink of an eye Creating shadows, all exposed In seconds, comes thousands of miles Bolts like tentacles Design patterns unique Leaps, splits and burns indiscreet No mercy she shows To man, beast or plants Smoke, and sparks left in trail Moving forward wherever she wills Destruction lies within her path Man harvests her power Like he tames a beast An extraordinary feat

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/30/2010 1:08:00 PM

Nice collaboaration from you both. It has raw engery and grit. Thank you for saying that about my Sondhem parody. It is one of the NICEST compliments that I have ever received! Thank you, Humbly, Gerard.

James Fraser

Date: 3/26/2010 11:23:00 AM

Poetry at its best from you two fine poets, many congrats >> James

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/23/2010 6:45:00 AM

Hi Audrey~ A wonderful descriptive write indeed. Could you please let Jim Anderson know I couldn't open him, soup mail to me again. It had an error message on it. Maybe you could repost for him? Thanks Kindly Laura :)

John Freeman

Date: 3/18/2010 7:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your success on this contest Aufrey. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/18/2010 6:27:00 PM

Well done!! Congratulations on your wonderful Rengay, Audrey! Love, Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/18/2010 4:58:00 PM

Yes congrad's I'm sorry Jimmy couldn't have put in the duplicate so he would get credit too BUT we can all go say congrad's under his verse too...I only got 1 as a contest entry? Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/18/2010 4:58:00 PM

congrats on the win, enjoyed!! you guys did good!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2010 3:19:00 PM

Hey a big congrats on your winning collaboration poem and placement in The Twining contest.. a wonderful win for both u and Jimmy to enjoy.. a special victory ..luv.. BBF Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/17/2010 9:03:00 PM

Another WOW u two.. good luck in the contest.. awesome.. your energies blend so very well.. explosive poetry .. sure winner circle trip I believe.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/17/2010 4:59:00 AM

Audrey and Jimmy, This poem is written well. You two have succeded in writing beautifully together in the Rengay. And the imagery is powerful as is the message. Well penned words. Good luck if this is your contest entry. It seems like a winner to me! Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/15/2010 11:08:00 PM

This collaboration is wonderful Audrey..beautiful indeed..Charna