Audrey Haick Poet Rengay

Brilliant Beauty

Audrey Carey
#0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson


Raw energy....
Brilliant beauty rides the skies
Quick as the wink of an eye

Creating shadows, all exposed
In seconds, comes thousands of miles 

Bolts like tentacles
Design patterns unique
Leaps, splits and burns indiscreet 

No mercy she shows
To man, beast or plants
Smoke, and sparks left in trail

Moving forward wherever she wills
Destruction lies within her path

Man harvests her power
Like he tames a beast
An extraordinary feat

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gerard Keogh Jr. March 30, 2010 at 1:08 PM Nice collaboaration from you both. It has raw engery and grit. Thank you for saying that about my Sondhem parody. It is one of the NICEST compliments that I have ever received! Thank you, Humbly, Gerard.

James Fraser March 26, 2010 at 11:23 AM Poetry at its best from you two fine poets, many congrats >> James

Laura Mckenzie March 23, 2010 at 6:45 AM Hi Audrey~ A wonderful descriptive write indeed. Could you please let Jim Anderson know I couldn't open him, soup mail to me again. It had an error message on it. Maybe you could repost for him? Thanks Kindly Laura :)

John Freeman March 18, 2010 at 7:34 PM Congratulations on your success on this contest Aufrey. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards March 18, 2010 at 6:27 PM Well done!! Congratulations on your wonderful Rengay, Audrey! Love, Carrie

Debbie Guzzi March 18, 2010 at 4:58 PM Yes congrad's I'm sorry Jimmy couldn't have put in the duplicate so he would get credit too BUT we can all go say congrad's under his verse too...I only got 1 as a contest entry? Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse March 18, 2010 at 4:58 PM congrats on the win, enjoyed!! you guys did good!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 18, 2010 at 3:19 PM Hey a big congrats on your winning collaboration poem and placement in The Twining contest.. a wonderful win for both u and Jimmy to enjoy.. a special victory ..luv.. BBF Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 17, 2010 at 9:03 PM Another WOW u two.. good luck in the contest.. awesome.. your energies blend so very well.. explosive poetry .. sure winner circle trip I believe.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 17, 2010 at 4:59 AM Audrey and Jimmy, This poem is written well. You two have succeded in writing beautifully together in the Rengay. And the imagery is powerful as is the message. Well penned words. Good luck if this is your contest entry. It seems like a winner to me! Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Charmaine Chircop March 15, 2010 at 11:08 PM This collaboration is wonderful Audrey..beautiful indeed..Charna