Brilliant Beauty

Audrey Carey
#0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson


Raw energy....
Brilliant beauty rides the skies
Quick as the wink of an eye

Creating shadows, all exposed
In seconds, comes thousands of miles 

Bolts like tentacles
Design patterns unique
Leaps, splits and burns indiscreet 

No mercy she shows
To man, beast or plants
Smoke, and sparks left in trail

Moving forward wherever she wills
Destruction lies within her path

Man harvests her power
Like he tames a beast
An extraordinary feat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/30/2010 1:08:00 PM
Nice collaboaration from you both. It has raw engery and grit. Thank you for saying that about my Sondhem parody. It is one of the NICEST compliments that I have ever received! Thank you, Humbly, Gerard.
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Date: 3/26/2010 11:23:00 AM
Poetry at its best from you two fine poets, many congrats >> James
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:45:00 AM
Hi Audrey~ A wonderful descriptive write indeed. Could you please let Jim Anderson know I couldn't open him, soup mail to me again. It had an error message on it. Maybe you could repost for him? Thanks Kindly Laura :)
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your success on this contest Aufrey. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/18/2010 6:27:00 PM
Well done!! Congratulations on your wonderful Rengay, Audrey! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:58:00 PM
Yes congrad's I'm sorry Jimmy couldn't have put in the duplicate so he would get credit too BUT we can all go say congrad's under his verse too...I only got 1 as a contest entry? Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:58:00 PM
congrats on the win, enjoyed!! you guys did good!!
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Date: 3/18/2010 3:19:00 PM
Hey a big congrats on your winning collaboration poem and placement in The Twining contest.. a wonderful win for both u and Jimmy to enjoy.. a special victory ..luv.. BBF Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/17/2010 9:03:00 PM
Another WOW u two.. good luck in the contest.. awesome.. your energies blend so very well.. explosive poetry .. sure winner circle trip I believe.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:59:00 AM
Audrey and Jimmy, This poem is written well. You two have succeded in writing beautifully together in the Rengay. And the imagery is powerful as is the message. Well penned words. Good luck if this is your contest entry. It seems like a winner to me! Big Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/15/2010 11:08:00 PM
This collaboration is wonderful Audrey..beautiful indeed..Charna
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