Bright Star Rose

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Candide Diderot.





"Bright Star Rose"

Bright Star shone on the bright side far beyond the dark side 
Bright Star let the dark slide between and underneath 
the cracks burning in the road well travelled under the Others' soles

and Bright Star’s soul levitated much higher above the ground

from the base of those Other empire state stories' eyes 
steadfast in their lofty realms hived in all those lost bodies 
united in a bad bad dream

and Bright Star soft falling mask of eremite melting 
rose higher and brighter than bright
and kissed the highest hidden brightest star 

blazing in the darkest night's dark indigo blue sky

and Bright Star riding the waked forever in a sweet unrest
outshone the singularity of the eclipsed 
enraptured and embraced as Love is 

in the Hidden's timeless breast



Candide Diderot. ‘24




"In all configurations
The curve is the thing that can go back on itself
Over and over
As the stars turn around each other
And light the way for travelers
Who come along through time
Looking for that one that could bend the path just so
To take us home

And light shines
And light shines

Around the table, where they all sit smiling
Hands with fingers moving as they tell their stories of being lost
Then found
No matter what the place, they saw the face
Of one who showed the way along the road well-traveled..."




"Bright Star, would I were steadfast as thou art"/John Keats, 1819
"And Light Shines"/David Lynch
"Meditative Rose"/Salvador Dali, 1958
"The Road not Taken"/Robert Frost, 1915. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/25/2024 11:57:00 AM
Hello Candide, I liked how you intricately effectively mix imagery and metaphor to explore the interplay between light and darkness, the known and the unknown. The juxtaposition of the bright star against the backdrop of the dark sky reflects a journey of enlightenment and transcendence. It is interesting to contemplate the complexities of existence and the quest for meaning in the vast expanse of the universe. - Well Done my friend. Daniel
Login to Reply
Diderot Avatar
Candide Diderot
Date: 5/25/2024 3:49:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/25/2024 12:59:00 AM
The Road Not Taken/Robert Frost, August 1915.
Login to Reply
Diderot Avatar
Candide Diderot
Date: 5/25/2024 12:59:00 AM
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44272/the-road-not-taken
Date: 5/25/2024 12:53:00 AM
"Bright star, wouldst I were as steadfast as thou art"/John Keats, 1819.
Login to Reply
Diderot Avatar
Candide Diderot
Date: 5/25/2024 12:54:00 AM
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44468/bright-star-would-i-were-stedfast-as-thou-art
Diderot Avatar
Candide Diderot
Date: 5/25/2024 12:53:00 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bright_star,_would_I_were_stedfast_as_thou_art
Date: 5/25/2024 12:51:00 AM
And Light Shines/David Lynch.
Login to Reply
Diderot Avatar
Candide Diderot
Date: 5/25/2024 12:52:00 AM
FULL LYRICS, "And Light Shines"/David Lynch. https://mojim.com/usy110379x5x5.htm
Diderot Avatar
Candide Diderot
Date: 5/25/2024 12:52:00 AM
https://youtu.be/3aJObyhNCoM?si=QnleB40pKw9L5xd8
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter