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Ryegrasses of sun-- fibrils twirling with grandeur while dawn reflects jade-like hue Laying on their patch bright morning weeds remind me-- to honor each day's marvels. ~ 3/31/2019 Writing Challenge 6, March 2019 – 6 lines Poetry Contest of Dear Heart~

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Date: 5/8/2019 3:45:00 PM
Well done, so beautiful and how I wish morning nature would remind all of the same appreciation that surely all have somewhere inside them. Surely. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 5/1/2019 10:10:00 AM
Soooo beautiful! The first line!
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Date: 4/7/2019 1:15:00 PM
Incredibly fresh turns of phrases have 'turned' these six precious lines into a well-deserved winner. Congrats! :) gw
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Date: 4/6/2019 12:56:00 PM
Yep, I thought this would be high on her list. Congratulations on your win Nette! xxoo : )
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Date: 4/5/2019 3:45:00 PM
Nicely written verse, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/5/2019 8:30:00 AM
That's so beautiful! Loved it.
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Date: 4/4/2019 12:27:00 PM
Beautiful poem Nette :) Congratulations !
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Date: 4/3/2019 12:42:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your second place win in my contest with this beautifully penned Sedoka and I love your image too ~
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Date: 4/3/2019 4:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on a great 2nd place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2019 5:48:00 PM
A lovely vision of nature's splendor Nette. I am sure to see this high on her winner's list! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/2/2019 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette:)
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Date: 4/2/2019 1:11:00 AM
Luv that, "jade-like hue" of dawn; beautifully penned. Best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 4/1/2019 9:42:00 PM
Lovely write Nette :)...love the last line :)
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Date: 4/1/2019 12:19:00 PM
- A golden gift, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2019 1:51:00 AM
There is nothing more beautiful than a dawn breaking or a sunset - a breath taking pic. you posted Nette and a lovely poem. poetry hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:19:00 PM
The gifts dawn brings...Wonderful write Nette...
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:01:00 PM
I am so happy sometimes with "bright morning weeds" - I am so glad we are together in this, Nette.
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Date: 3/31/2019 5:51:00 PM
The smallest things bring the greatest joys. You write with such grace. SuZ
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Date: 3/31/2019 4:53:00 PM
Awesome photo..reflected in your poem..truly honoring life's daily gifts.
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