Nette Onclaud Poet Sedoka

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Bright Morning Grass

Ryegrasses of  sun--
fibrils twirling with grandeur
while dawn reflects  jade-like hue

Laying on their patch
bright morning weeds  remind me--  
to  honor each day's marvels.



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3/31/2019
Writing Challenge 6, March 2019 –
6 lines Poetry Contest of Dear Heart~

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CayCay Godwin May 8, 2019 at 3:45 PM Well done, so beautiful and how I wish morning nature would remind all of the same appreciation that surely all have somewhere inside them. Surely. All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2019 at 10:10 AM Soooo beautiful! The first line!

Gershon Wolf April 7, 2019 at 1:15 PM Incredibly fresh turns of phrases have 'turned' these six precious lines into a well-deserved winner. Congrats! :) gw

Connie Marcum Wong April 6, 2019 at 12:56 PM Yep, I thought this would be high on her list. Congratulations on your win Nette! xxoo : )

Eve Roper April 5, 2019 at 3:45 PM Nicely written verse, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Supraja Kannan April 5, 2019 at 8:30 AM That's so beautiful! Loved it.

Heidi Sands April 4, 2019 at 12:27 PM Beautiful poem Nette :) Congratulations !

Constance La France April 3, 2019 at 12:42 PM Nette, congratulations on your second place win in my contest with this beautifully penned Sedoka and I love your image too ~

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2019 at 4:17 AM - Congratulations on a great 2nd place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 2, 2019 at 5:48 PM A lovely vision of nature's splendor Nette. I am sure to see this high on her winner's list! : ) xxoo

Joanna Daniel April 2, 2019 at 7:58 AM Beautiful, Nette:)

M. L. Kiser April 2, 2019 at 1:11 AM Luv that, "jade-like hue" of dawn; beautifully penned. Best of luck with the contest.

Chris Hagy April 1, 2019 at 9:42 PM Lovely write Nette :)...love the last line :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2019 at 12:19 PM - A golden gift, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos April 1, 2019 at 1:51 AM There is nothing more beautiful than a dawn breaking or a sunset - a breath taking pic. you posted Nette and a lovely poem. poetry hugs, Jenny.

Joseph May March 31, 2019 at 10:19 PM The gifts dawn brings...Wonderful write Nette...

Caren Krutsinger March 31, 2019 at 10:01 PM I am so happy sometimes with "bright morning weeds" - I am so glad we are together in this, Nette.

Suzanne Delaney March 31, 2019 at 5:51 PM The smallest things bring the greatest joys. You write with such grace. SuZ

Vijay Pandit March 31, 2019 at 4:53 PM Awesome photo..reflected in your poem..truly honoring life's daily gifts.