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Bright Eyes

As they gazed upon the pitch black night sky together
She had thought to herself she had never seen anything so bright before
She had never seen anything so innocent and so pure
As they gazed upon the pitch black sky together 
She's wondering...
Wondering if something will happen
Wondering if there would be some type of shooting star
She's wondering if something magical will happen tonight as they gaze upon the pitch black night sky

The pitch black night sky is all lit up, the stars had filled up the pitch black canvas 
As they look straight up at the lit up black canvas
 As they gaze into the beautiful painting called the midnight sky something magical does happen

As they gazed upon the pitch black night sky together she's thinking to herself about how the stars aren't the brightest thing here tonight
As he tilted his head away from the lit up canvas and into her eyes that's when she truly realized
The brightest thing that night wasn't the lit up pitch black night sky 
In her dark eyes the brightest thing out there that night was his bright eyes
She was realizing that she had found her shooting star finally 
At that time she was realizing that her shooting star she had been looking for all this time
It was in the sky staring down at her the whole time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/27/2019 5:29:00 AM
Ah, your story is so lovely and romantic, I'm glad I stopped by to read it, It put a smile on my face and a flutter in my heart. Hope to read more of you, Thank you for sharing, and have a wonderful day dear poet. xo
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