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Six beautiful lines Sponsored by Constance LA France
“Did my heart love till now? forswear it, sight! For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night.” “If Love be rough with you, be rough with Love, prick Love for pricking, and you beat Love down.” ~Romeo and Juliet Play by William Shakespeare instantly i recognize love my soul mate seductive strong from across the room i feel him as he tries to touch me with the passion in his eyes that sweet lovers high for which we long to be lifted body and soul above the ground into brilliant star light yet we still shine clinging to the elusive hope that we'll never ever come back down

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Date: 3/20/2025 7:01:00 AM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/19/2025 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Bright As Stars" write. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........
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Date: 3/15/2025 1:13:00 PM
Sexy, passionate and ultimately illusory lol. What goes up ... Still, gotta love your increasingly potent poetry Crys
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/15/2025 1:25:00 PM
Ugh... I've edited this poem 10 times to get the 6 lines! I've tried no punctuation, weird punctuation, taking words out, putting them in, spacing Wacky...urrrgh!!! I give up! It is what it is. Um, sorry to rant lol. Thank you for your kind review and yep!.... must come down! ;) xo

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