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Bright, a Victory

Bright, A Victory There's a ray of bright sunshine, After every night With this hope in mind, I will carry out my fight. A fight with myself and my rejection, I'm not sure the right path, in a direction I won't give up on life too soon, Nor the hurt of my will, deep a wound. No matter how my life turns out, I shall beat in this victory; My brightness will rise soon And that time isn't far. I soon will shine; and, brighten my victory.

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William Darnell Sr.

Date: 5/21/2020 8:39:00 PM

Oh my... I do believe I just deleted someone's comment, by accident. Can I get that back somehow? Wow, can't believe I just did that. So embarrassed ??.Best of Wishes, William

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2020 8:45:00 AM

Heartache makes one a better poet. Well expressed.

William Darnell Sr.
Date: 5/16/2020 10:40:00 AM

Hello again, Richard. Yes, I believe that as well. Our woes, backsets, and mistakes, all define who we are, and thank you for your sentiment. Best of Wishes, William

Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/13/2020 5:27:00 PM

You've written an Inspiring Poem, my friend. Keep going strong. How's the new laptop working out?

William Darnell Sr.
Date: 5/14/2020 8:18:00 PM

JC, I couldn't ask for any better encouragement. You are a gem! Laptop is working out fine, my friend. It is an S Model series, which means I have to run Microsoft. But, has an option to opt out. Thanks again, JC and take care ole' friend. Best of Wishes, William