William Darnell Sr Poet Rhyme

Bright, a Victory

Bright, A Victory


There's a ray of bright sunshine, 
After every night
With this hope in mind, 
I will carry out my fight.

A fight with myself and my rejection,
I'm not sure the right path, in a direction
I won't give up on life too soon,
Nor the hurt of my will, deep a wound.

No matter how my life turns out,
I shall beat in this victory;
My brightness will rise soon 
And that time isn't far.

I soon will shine; 
and,
brighten my victory.

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William Darnell Sr May 21, 2020 at 8:39 PM Oh my... I do believe I just deleted someone's comment, by accident. Can I get that back somehow? Wow, can't believe I just did that. So embarrassed ??.Best of Wishes, William

Richard Lamoureux May 16, 2020 at 8:45 AM Heartache makes one a better poet. Well expressed. William Darnell Sr May 16, 2020 at 10:40 AM Hello again, Richard. Yes, I believe that as well. Our woes, backsets, and mistakes, all define who we are, and thank you for your sentiment. Best of Wishes, William

Jc Hawkens May 13, 2020 at 5:27 PM You've written an Inspiring Poem, my friend. Keep going strong. How's the new laptop working out? William Darnell Sr May 14, 2020 at 8:18 PM JC, I couldn't ask for any better encouragement. You are a gem! Laptop is working out fine, my friend. It is an S Model series, which means I have to run Microsoft. But, has an option to opt out. Thanks again, JC and take care ole' friend. Best of Wishes, William