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bright blue skies covered smoke flows from trees' limbs burning... 'twas a nice fall day

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/25/2023 3:49:00 PM

Wonderful September days of temperate warmth here. Wish it would continue into November. As you well point out, Sara, "twas a nice fall day." But smoky. A haiku of irony? Be well. Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2023 5:01:00 AM

Brian, I don't know where you live but I see on TV how some northern states and countries do get some early cold and some early snow. Thanks for dropping by with your nice comment. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 9/24/2023 3:25:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, for some reason I always get excited when i see blue skies, not sure why. Its always been that way: i love how you’ve described your day here and what you see so seamlessly. Brilliant haiku

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/24/2023 7:03:00 AM

IE, They seem to go on and on forever don't they like there is nothing there to tie us to this world. Thank you IE, for the nice review of my work, I appreciate the time spent here and the nice comments. SK

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2023 1:58:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Sara. Great imagery. Good to have a splendid day during the Fall.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/24/2023 7:01:00 AM

Victor, Fall and spring are my favorite times of the year despite the fact that I have seasonal allergies. I don't do well at all in the heat of summer nor in the coldest days of winter. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to read and comment on my work. SK

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2023 9:30:00 AM

it's getting really chilly out itoo. May you keep on having nice fall days

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2023 12:57:00 PM

Andrea, Yes, it was about 61 here this morning which meant a light jacket until the sun came out and hit the earth for a few hours then it warmed up. Thanks for the wishes for more fall days. I hope we get some nice ones, also. I hope it is getting more comfortable out in your area as well. Thanks for the visit and the nice review of my work. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/23/2023 7:35:00 AM

Your haiku is absolutely beautiful, Sara! You have a remarkable talent for breathing life into words, effortlessly allowing the reader to immerse themselves in the vivid imagery you create.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2023 12:55:00 PM

I am glad you could immerse yourself in the imagery. Your visits are encouraging. Thank you for the time spent here. Sara

Silent One

Date: 9/23/2023 7:27:00 AM

Sounds lovely, you do the haiku very well my friend... You bring words into life and make it easy for the reader to imagine..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2023 12:54:00 PM

Why, thank you, SO. I appreciate the very uplifting review of my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2023 11:10:00 AM

- Great haiku, Sara :) - Have the water hose ready :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2023 12:43:00 PM

Anne-Lise, Once a wildfire or forest fire was coming our way. One neighbor put a water sprinkle on top of his house and let it run until they had the fire contained. Thanks for dropping by and for the advice. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 9/22/2023 10:41:00 AM

Good one, Sara. My niece text a couple of weeks ago of the fires going on and the ashes falling around her. It is scarry.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2023 12:42:00 PM

Eve, Yes, with a fire like that no one knows if a spark will start a wildfire that gets out of control. I hope it is wet enough to keep wildfires down because the wind is coming this way from where the fire is going. Thanks for the visit and the kind review of my work. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/22/2023 8:03:00 AM

Hi Sara, Your photo and haiku worked so well together. Great job. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2023 12:41:00 PM

Why, thank you, Alexis. I hope your weekend is a great one also. Sara