Bright

So many tears they've cried, So many things they've seen, But still they shine brighter than the moonlight at its fullest. The world cannot dull souls For they, my dear, are stronger than the ball of gas that runs our entire universe.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/17/2025 5:50:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.

FJ Thomas

Date: 4/18/2018 8:24:00 AM

Hmm... a couple ways this could be taken. Awesome Emma! Welcome to PS!

Emma Barnard
Date: 4/18/2018 11:30:00 AM

Thank you so much!