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Brief: the Lady Slipper

The lady slipper
Flowering pink in shadows
Rare beauty of love
Rising above the darkness
Perfect fit worn by the heart

Heidi Sands

7/1/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mccall Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 10:02 AM
A sweet little Tanka Heidi good luck in the contest.
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Thanks
Williams Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 11:24 PM
Love your Tanka Heidi, we have them growing in our back garden in profusion - they are so beautiful - I think of fairy slippers when I look at them. All the best with the Contest...Maria
Sands Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Hi. That is so nice that you have them growing in your back garden :) Thank you
Goff Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 7:10 PM
Gorgeous, Heidi! I have such fond memories and photos of our State Flower (Minnesota) camping with my daughters in Itasca State Park where the "supposed" Mississippi's Headwaters resides, on Lake Itasca...(not true according to Schoolcraft's guide Chief Ozawindib") my girls & I found the true spring source from Ozawindib's journal on Elk Lake & located it!
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Hi James. Thank you for your comment! I am so happy this brings you fond memories....and Thanks for sharing the interesting story. :)
Callus Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 4:39 PM
A lovely poem, Heidi. Somehow, that slipper and perfect fit remind me of Cinderella! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 4:45 PM
So nice to hear Paul. Thank you :)
Smith Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 2:52 PM
This is beautiful Heidi :) nice write Hope to see both our names up there!!
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 2:58 PM
Thank you so much Jeremy :)
Daniel Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 8:57 AM
A beautiful tanka, Heidi, first time I'm seeing this flower and it amazes me:) that last line is perfect:)
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Wow Jo Daniel. Amazing the first time you have seen it, but they are rare and therefore protected too. I am happy you like this :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 8:12 AM
lovely verse with hues that come alive, heidi... i like this tanka.. huggs
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Hi Nette. Thank you. I am happy to hear that :)
Sathasivam Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Excellent. Beautiful tanka. All the best for your contest. Enjoy.
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Ravi. I appreciate your comment :)
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 3:53 AM
A beautiful tanka, Heidi! Best of luck to you in the contest
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Thank you White Wolf. I have never done a Tanka before :)
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 7:00 PM
an absolute gem of a tanka Heidi I love the romance in the final line! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 7:02 PM
Thanks so much Jan ! :)
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