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Brief Hospital Stay

i hate people in sterile places its unnerving to see them leached of colour, needles in their skin like punctured paper And prodded by white coats , trying to find an answer Can’t they see the problem? fake flowers do nothing to lessen the paint of pale walls sinking into her eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/16/2018 11:15:00 AM
Jaz, this really brings home the starkness and impersonal-ness of a hospital stay.
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Jay Yeats
Date: 11/19/2018 2:40:00 AM
Thank you :))

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