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Brief: Amaranth View

An Amaranth view
Reaching past the horizon
Radiant rose-red 
Mind body and soul align
Lucidly I look ahead

6/30/17

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Heidi Sands

July 2, 2017 at 8:43 PM

This Tanka is beautiful and I hope it does well in the contest :)

Poetically Numb

July 2, 2017 at 10:35 PM

Thank you so much Heidi!! :)

White Wolf

July 2, 2017 at 9:40 AM

Oh, this is so amazing, Alexis! What a gem! Look forward to seeing this again on the winners' list

Poetically Numb

July 2, 2017 at 10:34 PM

Omg such a huge compliment coming from one of the greats! Thank you so much for the view and comment!

Alyssa Lorette

July 1, 2017 at 1:40 PM

Beautiful tanka, Alexis! Amaranth's are definitely pretty, I love them. Good luck! :)

Poetically Numb

July 3, 2017 at 1:27 AM

Thank you so much Alyssa ! They are beautiful indeed :)

Daniel Turner

June 30, 2017 at 8:28 PM

I think you and your husband have English Lit majors. You both write beautiful poetry. This is wonderful, Alexis!

Poetically Numb

June 30, 2017 at 8:52 PM

Aww I'm blushing! So sweet to say. Hah, nope just a high school grad :) always loved writing but somewhere I lost it. My husband helped me to find it again! Feels great. Thank you so much for the view and kind words.