Kelly Deschler Poet Free verse

Bride of Frankenstein

I have a favor to ask of you, Dr. Frankenstein
because this monster needs her mate
please give him strong arms to hold me with
gentle eyes that are electrifying to look into
tender lips with a kiss to die for
give him soft hair that I could run my fingers through
hands like Percy Shelley, so he could write poetry for me
feet like Fred Astaire, so he could sweep me off of mine
give him a sweet voice that could sing me to sleep
and of course, the most important part, a true and loving heart.
I know that no man is perfect, but this is as close as it gets.
Is this too much to ask?

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Verlena S. Walker July 1, 2014 at 5:54 PM Nice Kelly. I like your description of the perfect man. Well done... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena Kelly Deschler July 4, 2014 at 1:10 AM Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, Verlena. I really appreciate your nice comments and the kind congrats!

Herzel Poshiwa June 27, 2014 at 4:57 AM Not at all Kelly, nice write.... Kelly Deschler June 30, 2014 at 5:35 PM I didn't think so, either ;) ....Thank you for the kind comments, Herzel. I appreciate it very much!

Paul Callus June 27, 2014 at 3:16 AM Enjoyable read, Kelly! It is not too much to ask for...eventually one has to settle for what s/he gets...might not get it all, but could be surprised by other simpler yet worthier gifts! // paul Kelly Deschler June 30, 2014 at 4:57 PM I agree, Paul. Eventually, we do have to settle for what we get, and usually that turns out to be everything we ever needed!.... I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, it was a fun one to write! Thank you for the great comments and the kind congrats! :) Paul Callus June 27, 2014 at 3:17 AM ....Ohh...congratulations :)))

Pandita Sietesantos June 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM Hi Kelly, I love this poem - this is a reflection of knowing what you want. It is better to start with the ideal man and hopefully we'll get one who comes close to it::-). Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Warmest regards. Kelly Deschler June 29, 2014 at 1:49 AM I agree Pandita, every girl dreams of their ideal man, but no man is perfect. Eventually, we do learn that and find out they are all we really need, and nothing else matters.... Thank you for the great comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it so much!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 26, 2014 at 2:09 AM Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win Kelly Deschler June 29, 2014 at 1:33 AM Thank you, Dr. Ram. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my poem on Thursday morning!

Poet Destroyer A June 25, 2014 at 11:47 PM Kelly, , Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA

Cherl Dunn October 14, 2013 at 12:04 PM Cute after all if frankenstein is a man of the best parts of other men why not get what you most desire as his bride, it can become the made to order groom. lol

Danesh Morgan September 20, 2013 at 2:07 AM you should ask the early got father for this wish. . . lols next would be shrek i think huh. . .

Liam Mcdaid September 10, 2013 at 2:15 PM CAN I PUT AN ORDER IN MR FRANK PLEASE EXCELLENT GOT A BIG SMILE FROM ME

Dan Kearley September 9, 2013 at 7:34 PM I think it's reasonable. :o) Nice write!