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Bridal Carpet

Immaculately vacuumed purified from century-old h i b e r n a t i o n of naphthalene balls’ seal… Here am I transformed… exuding sweet freshness as opalescent heirloom so grandly a d o r n e d with white rose petals ready to w e l c o m e… … the blissful v i r g i n for her blest bridal march while orchestra plays... "G O D L O V E S* M E."
*2Thessalonians 3:5 And the Lord direct your hearts into the love of God, and into the patient waiting for Christ. June 6, 2020 6th place, "SOME KIND OF SENSUAL" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud; judged on 6/7/2020.

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Date: 6/8/2020 8:31:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:28:00 AM
Loved the poignant yet sensuous write of yours. Congratulations on your win Beata! :)
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