Brick Wall

You're a terrible friend,
you let me bleed, you made me bend.
Still, i pine for you, 
because at least a brick wall
is better to run to than nothing at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 27, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 31, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Aimee, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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