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Brick

The third little pig knew how to pick When making his abode of brick. Of course, he chose it ‘cause it’s strong And on that count, he wasn’t wrong… But also, it has street appeal, A stateliness that can conceal Whatever’s happening inside, For upright living is implied. I grew up in a brick-built house And live in one now with my spouse So all my life I’ve felt secure. When I’m at home, I know for sure That no one will invade my space. No huffs or puffs can e’er deface The sturdy bricks on proud display That keep those big bad wolves away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/5/2017 9:43:00 PM
A home has a foundation. It's built with warmth and love. No matter what material, a home comes from above. :)
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Date: 11/30/2017 10:34:00 PM
Another great poem Ilene. Well done!!!....pat
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:00:00 PM
Oh, this is one of your best poems, Ilene. I like how you made the connection between the 3 little pigs, the bad wolf and your own secure house & home. ~ Here in Malta most houses are built of stone, though modern ones are now using bricks. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/27/2017 3:17:00 PM
Yes, brick layers deserve our thanks st this time of year! Happy Hanukkah! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:49:00 PM
That is pretty cool, Ilene. What do you think of wood frames? If not for them, my hubbie could never have been a framing contractor. haha. I think where you live are many brick type houses, right? I am glad at least mine is not straw!!
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Date: 11/26/2017 4:12:00 PM
I also grew up in a brick built house and think they definitely have a certain charm:-) Really enjoyed your poem Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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