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Brick

You front like you are hollow. Emotionless. All your crude language about women sickens me. However, deep DEEP down Beneath the brick-casing that surrounds you, Feelings and fears exist. My intuition speaks to me Because I can see your soul through those enticing greenish eyes Which is the reason why I hold on to you so dear... I can see through your seeming disguise. Mr. I-just-want-to-be-a-guy Mr. I-don't-care Mr. I-am-not-going-to-tell-you-if-I-have-feelings-for-you-or-not I can see through your lies. If you could just feel what I am feeling See what I see Or you could just be real with me. As simple as that. The brick that surrounds you is keeping a friendship from growing A possible romance from developing And keeping me from showing you my sincerity. Do you know that I could possibly hold the key That unlocks the chains Surrounding the brick Incasing your heart That I long to know?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/5/2010 5:38:00 PM
i love reading your poetry my friend thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:39:00 PM
well written my friend love it well done [duncan]
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:08:00 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Lauren. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:48:00 PM
don't read too much into his junk...or you'll be living it from now on... just a word of warning. good poem written!
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