Brevity - the Soul of Wit

BREVITY – the soul of wit

One was red, one was blue
the pair - a sneaker and a shoe
so he laughed as he retold
the story given him by mother
that his brother wore the other.


John G. Lawless
7/7/2015

submitted to – Brevity – The Short Of It – poetry contest
sponsor – Casarah Nance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 11:25 PM
this is really cute, John. LOVE brevity!!
La France Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 7:48 AM
John, a funny fun write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, drunken
Ward Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 1:44 AM
That's a very appealing poem, John... I wish it well. Julia, xx
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 9:03 PM
Great little verse, John, thanks for smile generating. Should do well. Regards, Viv
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:55 PM
John, this is such a cute poem. I must share it. A classic to be memorized. I loved it! I can see it at the top of the winners list! I am fav'ing it! 7
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