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Brenda Loved Brennan the Boatman

Brenda penned a story about Brennan the boatswain in Bermuda Who had bought a Bavaria 43 barque for a sailing adventure. The story began with the ballad of Brennan: 'Come sail with me, on see-saw sea Becapped, bedecked, emblazoned blithely, a blast! Your love becalmed in my arms embrace. All aboard, all in, with my deck I beckon.' As the rollicking tale unfolded, Brenda fell brow over boots, besotted, in love with Brennan. She found herself browsing more and more online Searching for 'Bermuda', 'Brennan', 'Bavaria Barque', Hoping to find a real Brennan on board, waiting becalmed, with arms beckoning For her to embolden her text and join him. 10 September 2016

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Date: 10/11/2016 4:22:00 PM
Great alliteration and well written, John. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Date: 10/11/2016 8:38:00 AM
clever and cute John.. congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/11/2016 2:38:00 PM
Clever piece of Alliteration, John. Well written. Barry
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