Breezy Jane

The breeze…the breeze…the breeze It blows her pain away The breeze…the breeze…the breeze It makes everything okay For all that seems it brings… A happy breezy Jane~ Wondrous windy days ….can take that empty shame Lifting all the sorrow…..and blowing away the blame The breeze shall seize her fears…..taking them away If fallen leaves could speak…. wonder what they’d say Before they leave the trees…. to convey a changing way For all that seems it brings… A happy breezy Jane~ I wonder if the breeze…. could remove strife that way Making every thing better ….and mixing it with rain The wind against your skin ….doesn’t seem like much to say A mighty thought inside…. Procures hope finds its way Lft your head up to the sky…let wind blow where it may For all that seems it brings… A happy breezy Jane

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John Loving Iii

Date: 8/9/2008 7:33:00 AM

Great work jane. even thought the summer takes us far away from our poetic lives, you still remain. thanks. JHL

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/7/2008 10:43:00 AM

Sweet poem - reminds me of the song "Windy" by the Association. I guess that dates me a bit. Nice, breezy write

Angela Crabtree

Date: 6/12/2008 8:58:00 AM

Yes, you are best described as breezy. A lovely introspective lyric poem. I must, must must put it in my favorites. You could melt away the pain of the world if given the opportunity. So good, sweetie! Peace, Ivy

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/11/2008 10:15:00 AM

This is just wonderful. I especially like to feel the winds against my skin early in the morning or in the evening while walking the sandy beach. I like the consistency of this poem and the theme. Great job! ~ Joseph