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Breezes and Sneezes

Freedom flings out the summer breezes In a park where allergens make sneezes. Men gather to toss their plastic frisbees, Taking off from work for sick day freebies. written February 17, 2022 (Enjoying my lunch in a Florida State roadside park)

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/23/2022 10:01:00 AM

Enjoying a summer breeze is the best kind of freedom; you say it well here Hank.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/23/2022 11:04:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I was sitting on a park bench writing and watching the droves of men coming and going playing frisbee. I assumed the were on their lunch hour or were skipping work in the afternoon. I was in the throes of allergies. This is early spring pollen time in the tropic parts of Florida.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/23/2022 9:14:00 AM

Can't blame them for taking a day off in the lovely sunshine lol. Welcome back Milton, I hope you had a lovely vacation. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/23/2022 9:35:00 AM

Had a wonderful time, Tom. It is so good to be back home, though.