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Breezes and Sneezes

Freedom flings out the summer breezes
In a park where allergens make sneezes.

Men gather to toss their plastic frisbees,
Taking off from work for sick day freebies.

written February 17, 2022
(Enjoying my lunch in a
Florida State roadside park)

fungameshumornaturelight verse

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Caren Krutsinger

February 23, 2022 at 10:01 AM

Enjoying a summer breeze is the best kind of freedom; you say it well here Hank.

L Milton Hankins

February 23, 2022 at 11:04 AM

Thanks, Caren. I was sitting on a park bench writing and watching the droves of men coming and going playing frisbee. I assumed the were on their lunch hour or were skipping work in the afternoon. I was in the throes of allergies. This is early spring pollen time in the tropic parts of Florida.