Breezes

Remembering the sorrow Remembering the pain The time had come, I had come undone I came unglued I released my heart to you I stopped holding back not being brave My heart under attack All those hours All those lies Pretending to show my heart but really hiding inside No one knows the cries Hidden behind darkened eyes Thoughts of goodbyes Why did I try What good is a future If haunted by the past Lost, scared and alone This heart needed a home Aimlessly searching, which way shall it go Finally softened by breezes that blew in from the unknown A beat that was lost Getting stronger each day To have and to hold Once dead it springs new You've saved me my peach You know I love you

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/7/2014 11:39:00 AM

beautifully crafted tim dear friend excellent piece

Tim Smith
Date: 11/7/2014 8:41:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend liam

Mario De Paz

Date: 11/7/2014 11:32:00 AM

I appreciate much your poems, Tim. There is something which makes me think about Universe. Compliments

Tim Smith
Date: 11/7/2014 8:40:00 PM

Thank you Mario my friend...cheers

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/5/2014 9:37:00 AM

Great write Tim! Seize The Day...

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 9:00:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/5/2014 4:30:00 AM

a heartbreaking, splendid scene of angst well impressed on my mind, tim... stellar write!. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 8:59:00 PM

Thank you nette...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/5/2014 2:02:00 AM

The first lines hit deep..The pain,the sorrow,lies,sorrow hidden inside..Ahh how love can hurt,but love can heal too,the last lines hit sweet,as a peach loving you.I love your new chapter in the ending lines.A beautiful poem Tim playing on the heart strings.A favo(u)rite-Charma.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 8:58:00 PM

Thanks Charma ... I do love the ending lines too...hugs Tim

Mama Bear

Date: 11/4/2014 9:02:00 PM

We all want to find the perfect love and I really hope that you do. We kiss a lot of toads till we find our prince and in your case the princess. Hugs and blessings Edith

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 8:57:00 PM

Thank you Edith...hugs

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/4/2014 9:00:00 PM

this has so much emotion baby, there is always hope for rebirth, keep planting seeds and a beautiful garden will grow for you, :)

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 8:56:00 PM

Thanks Cas....hugs

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/4/2014 8:59:00 PM

xox

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2014 6:45:00 PM

'what good is a future, if haunted by the past' - oh Tim so many many people can relate to those particular lines, the final stanza shows you are ready to move on and find that someone special:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:47:00 PM

Thanks Jan... Hugs Tim