Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Breezes

Remembering the sorrow

Remembering the pain

The time had come, I had come undone

I came unglued

I released my heart to you

I stopped holding back

not being brave

My heart under attack


All those hours

All those lies

Pretending to show my heart

but really hiding inside


No one knows the cries

Hidden behind darkened eyes

Thoughts of goodbyes

Why did I try

What good is a future

If haunted by the past

Lost, scared and alone

This heart needed a home

Aimlessly searching, which way shall it go

Finally softened by breezes 

that blew in from the unknown


A beat that was lost

Getting stronger each day

To have and to hold

Once dead it springs new

You've saved me my peach

You know I love you

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Liam Mcdaid November 7, 2014 at 11:39 AM beautifully crafted tim dear friend excellent piece Tim Smith November 7, 2014 at 8:41 PM Thank you my dear friend liam

Mario De Paz November 7, 2014 at 11:32 AM I appreciate much your poems, Tim. There is something which makes me think about Universe. Compliments Tim Smith November 7, 2014 at 8:40 PM Thank you Mario my friend...cheers

Maurice Yvonne November 5, 2014 at 9:37 AM Great write Tim! Seize The Day... Tim Smith November 5, 2014 at 9:00 PM Thank you my friend

Nette Onclaud November 5, 2014 at 4:30 AM a heartbreaking, splendid scene of angst well impressed on my mind, tim... stellar write!. huggs Tim Smith November 5, 2014 at 8:59 PM Thank you nette...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop November 5, 2014 at 2:02 AM The first lines hit deep..The pain,the sorrow,lies,sorrow hidden inside..Ahh how love can hurt,but love can heal too,the last lines hit sweet,as a peach loving you.I love your new chapter in the ending lines.A beautiful poem Tim playing on the heart strings.A favo(u)rite-Charma. Tim Smith November 5, 2014 at 8:58 PM Thanks Charma ... I do love the ending lines too...hugs Tim

Mama Bear November 4, 2014 at 9:02 PM We all want to find the perfect love and I really hope that you do. We kiss a lot of toads till we find our prince and in your case the princess. Hugs and blessings Edith Tim Smith November 5, 2014 at 8:57 PM Thank you Edith...hugs

Casarah Nance November 4, 2014 at 9:00 PM this has so much emotion baby, there is always hope for rebirth, keep planting seeds and a beautiful garden will grow for you, :) Tim Smith November 5, 2014 at 8:56 PM Thanks Cas....hugs

Casarah Nance November 4, 2014 at 8:59 PM xox

Jan Allison November 4, 2014 at 6:45 PM 'what good is a future, if haunted by the past' - oh Tim so many many people can relate to those particular lines, the final stanza shows you are ready to move on and find that someone special:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith November 4, 2014 at 6:47 PM Thanks Jan... Hugs Tim