Breeze

Breeze, my irrepressible desire, would 
Become 

For

Once, your unapproachable dream figure 
To embrace!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
  10 NOVEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Ultimate Romance. This is just such a beautiful write. It uplifts the spirit. Fav!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Thank you, Maurice, for your uplifting comment!
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:03 PM
You're always so good at this Demetrios. Very creative and kind of humorous. Lol..Enjoyed my visit with you today my dear friend. :) love and hugs! xxxx D
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 7:11 AM
Thank you my good friend, Dorian, for your heartfelt comment! Love and hugs to you too!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:39 AM
You laugh at what you wrote below to Richard but I think for us at poetry soup it would be very fitting to see that on your tomb stone.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 10:48 AM
If that is the case meine freudin, Brenda, I shouldn't miss... the opportunity offered! Thank you for visiting!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 8:35 AM
I also appreciate your sense of humor Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Merci mon ami, Richard!
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:02 AM
Breezes of desire-Romantic and Sensual!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Only a romantic heart could appreciate it, dear Charmaine! Thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:42 AM
Romance dances along your page Demetrious. You posses a youthful heart imbued with an ageless wisdom.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 4:20 AM
I love your comment my good friend, Richard, especially the second part that I would love to have it inscribed on my tomb stone: " Here lies Demetrios, a man of youthful heart imbued with an ageless wisdom." Unless, of course, you come up with something even better! Ha-ha! That is the way I feel my friend, concerning my heart, but I have a lot of trouble to convince her when she sees me in the mirror! Thank you so much!
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