Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Lanterne

Breeze

Breeze
Makes her
Feel fine when
Curtains swell in
Air.


Breeze
Is like
The blissful
Love when you are
Blown

Wind
Gentle
Lifts her off
In land of dreams
Rush

Air
Nifty
Nestles skin
Pleats her dress in
flow
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19-1-14
Dr. Ram Mehta
Form: Lanterne
Contest: Breeze by The Poet Undetaker

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Robert Pettit January 22, 2014 at 3:09 PM Looks like a fine example of a lanterne.

Roger Horsch January 20, 2014 at 12:29 PM This is a lovely poem Dr Ram, I enjoyed reading it.....Roger

Charmaine Chircop January 20, 2014 at 4:26 AM I love this beauty..especially the way it ends..Breezy : )

Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 4:04 AM - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest, Dr Ram. - Have a great new week! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)