Breeze

Follow if you're bold enough to wander wild and free I will take you where your jaded heart has always longed to be
Taken from the poem "Summer Breeze - Mystery" written July 6, 2016 YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET #3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS
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Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Dear Francis, I adore the vivacious spirit of your exquisite couplet. My heart’s imagination is truly enchanted. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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October 21, 2021 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, Susan. ...Fran
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:58 AM
such touching lines Francis, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 21, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, Jan. ...Fran
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October 18, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Hi Fran, Congratulations on your win in the contest; poignant indeed. Blessings, Paulette
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October 21, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, Paulette. ...Fran
Gauthier Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Love this Francis. Congrats on your win with this beauty ~
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Hi, Line. Thank you. ...Fran
Agustin Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Beata. God bless you, lovely lady. ...Fran
Alex Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 11:49 PM
Great writing. Congratulations!
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Christural. ...Fran
Hankins Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Francis, I offer my congratulations for your fine placement in my recent couplet contest. I thoroughly enjoyed your couplet. Out of fifty entries, this is a wonderful placement.
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Milton. And also, a sincere thanks for hosting these fine contests. ...Fran
Zahid Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 3:02 AM
Wow.. That's lovely! Well penned.
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Paghunda. ...Fran
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Wonderful. how does he choose among so many well written couplets I see here all the time? Yours right at the top for me among them.
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Hi, Andrea... thank you. Wow, there are so many really good poets here. I often feel like the kid that got to first base with a dribbler to right field! ...Fran
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 4:22 AM
You are quite an accomplished poet, I like your words.
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Hello, Rose... thank you very much! ...Fran
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