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t e n d r i l s Creeping on my windowpane peek into my heart, them I refuse Awake, I fear their unknown recluse They wind my shivering fears in threads and let them curl till they squeeze to last bead haloed drops disperse from my window my anxieties engulfed afloat like paper boats spiral dreams bubble from the breeding-box valley my room lit with their playful exuberance Ah! One tendril I catch at last y It lends me a hand to ascend l we swivel from bedside and f Afar, bursting light brewing hope across the county line Rhapsody of enchanting mid nights the old gatekeeper that sings white patches melt in golden hues dreams tiptoe through mauve skies treasures of crimson opera, I unlock memories blush revealing dim chandeliers they become more mine than I am then lull me to sleep as I release the effervescence dancing to beats in the ballroom of my subconscious mind like reclined paper planes in azure clouds that spiral love on their paper boats as snowflakes in the city that never sleeps June 10, 2020 Spiral Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann ~Premiere Contest Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 8/7/2020 7:14:00 PM
How blessed are we to see and feel every snowdrop fall on this windowpane through this poetic melody, I was transformed into another world as I read it, and it remained into my sleep, lovely . . . : )
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Date: 6/24/2020 1:44:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, and sharing your poetry gift and talent. God bless you.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/24/2020 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for your blessed words of appreciation Beata. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/23/2020 4:06:00 PM
Your top win in the spiral contest is well-deserved. You should be very proud of this entry, Aditi, it is so full of dreamy images, and metaphors of freedom and flight with enough ambiguity to allow the imagination to roam. I loved "the effervescence dancing to beats / in the ballroom of my subconscious mind". Keep writing these beauties! I heartily congratulate you for your #1 win ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/24/2020 9:16:00 AM
Your appreciating words always make my day dear friend. I am always honored by the way you read my work and discuss about it. Your encouragement is really valuable for me. Thank you for your kind words. God bless you John :)
Date: 6/23/2020 2:00:00 PM
Your talents come into full view in this creative 'spiral' interpretation, Aditi. Both content and presentation combine to make this poem most worthy of the first place awarded in the contest. Congratulations!! ~ best regards // paul
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/24/2020 9:15:00 AM
Blessed by your generous words of appreciation Paul. Thank you for your encouraging words. God bless you :)
Date: 6/23/2020 10:56:00 AM
Wow Aditi...I am sure many more trophies are waiting at your doorstep, the first place is like reserved for you in all contests...but this one is a masterpiece of creativity . Such depth , I need to relish this to enjoy...faving it..A big congrats..very happy at your TOP win
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/24/2020 9:14:00 AM
You are really kind and generous with your appreciation for my words. I am honored that you love them and shower your best wishes for me. Thank you for the constant encouragement you give. Blessings and much love :)
Date: 6/23/2020 8:52:00 AM
Excellent! Heartiest congratulations on your deserving trophy win, Aditi!:-)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm wishes Edward. God bless you :)
Date: 6/23/2020 8:03:00 AM
WOW. Awesome and Congrats!! Love it and sending your blessings, prayers and much love, Gina
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely blessings dear Gina. Much love. God bless you :)
Date: 6/23/2020 7:27:00 AM
Emmmmmmmmm..m........... Golden facilitated Congratulated Bravozzzzzz On your First place ....
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 7:31:00 AM
Thanks again Gideon. God bless you :)
Date: 6/23/2020 7:26:00 AM
Aditi You Finished this oneooooooooo!! Wonders of Wonderful I hail thee!!!! Favourited favour favorite
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Date: 6/23/2020 7:31:00 AM
Glad you liked it Gideon. Thank you for the appreciating words :) Blessings
Date: 6/23/2020 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully unique poem taking top honors Aditi. So creative! Blessings xxoo
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for your loving words Connie. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/11/2020 9:08:00 AM
Such a dreamlike rhapsody of imagery . Your powerful write creates a powerful mood. A great entry for the contest. Good Luck !!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation and for your wishes Mike. God bless you :)
Date: 6/11/2020 1:08:00 AM
Wow.. creativity at its best.. lovely image imprinted for eyes and mind.. Good luck Aditi..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 6:13:00 AM
Blessed to receive your gracious words of appreciation Jenish. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings :)
Date: 6/10/2020 11:06:00 PM
Wow, amazing poetry, the imagery superb, and so powerful,,good luck in contest. Aditi.
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Date: 6/10/2020 11:21:00 PM
Blessed to read your delightful words of appreciation Harry. Thank you for your kind wishes. God bless you :)

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