Nette Onclaud Poet Acrostic

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Breathtaking Nova

B eneath the cloudline shines one star that greets
R adiant flames with a murmured drawl,
E ager to shimmer on, yet dusk time fleets
A s winds peal their ballad to enthrall…
T ill glints the orchid like a jewel
H eavenly in the amber of light,
T eetering near the edge for a hued flight
A nd pearl its brightness reaching star’s cell …
K iln of glitter spreads on a marquee, where
I ridescence leaps its twinkling climb…
N ever a sight this breathless , this rare
G lorious oh nova and bloom… sublime!


Contest: Brian's Choice P

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 5:59 PM Nette, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA

Funom Makama March 15, 2016 at 12:45 PM The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece

Sathya Babu March 13, 2016 at 8:59 PM Nice Write Nette......Many congrats on this WIN.

Meenakshi Raina March 13, 2016 at 8:23 PM Congrats on your win !

Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 3:57 PM nicely written, Nette-- congratulations on your placement!

Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 12:41 PM Nette, lovely acrostic you wrote, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Sandra Haight March 13, 2016 at 10:24 AM Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton March 12, 2016 at 10:37 PM Just beautiful Nette you really have a wonderful way with words this was a beauty 32/34 congrats on a nice 3rd place win!

Connie Marcum Wong March 12, 2016 at 1:40 AM Ahhh, the heavens and a new star, what could be more poetic Nette! #7

Bl Devnath March 11, 2016 at 6:00 PM Excellent nova and bloom. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl

CayCay Godwin March 11, 2016 at 10:38 AM YES! Love it ... CayCay

Jayne Eggins March 11, 2016 at 5:40 AM I really loved this Nette beautifully done on one of my favourite topics too, Brava ! And good luck in the comp !! #7 Love Jayne x

Matthew Anish March 11, 2016 at 12:09 AM Fine acrostic here. I liked the last line a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Norma Arana March 10, 2016 at 10:27 PM Majestic view of cosmic delight we sometimes take for granted. You leave me breathless and in awe of your outstanding poem!

Tim Smith March 10, 2016 at 7:38 PM Love your astronomy writes nette... lovely

Carly Lalion March 10, 2016 at 1:43 PM One star can do miracles and allow us to breathtakingly savor the beauty of life.Marvelous gem of poem like no other!

Daniel Turner March 10, 2016 at 1:11 PM Star gazing can indeed be very breathtaking. Love your interpretation, nette. Peace my lady:)