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B eneath the cloudline shines one star that greets R adiant flames with a murmured drawl, E ager to shimmer on, yet dusk time fleets A s winds peal their ballad to enthrall… T ill glints the orchid like a jewel H eavenly in the amber of light, T eetering near the edge for a hued flight A nd pearl its brightness reaching star’s cell … K iln of glitter spreads on a marquee, where I ridescence leaps its twinkling climb… N ever a sight this breathless , this rare G lorious oh nova and bloom… sublime! Contest: Brian's Choice P

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Date: 3/15/2016 5:59:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:45:00 PM
The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece
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Date: 3/13/2016 8:59:00 PM
Nice Write Nette......Many congrats on this WIN.
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Date: 3/13/2016 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win !
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Date: 3/13/2016 3:57:00 PM
nicely written, Nette-- congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 3/13/2016 12:41:00 PM
Nette, lovely acrostic you wrote, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:24:00 AM
Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:37:00 PM
Just beautiful Nette you really have a wonderful way with words this was a beauty 32/34 congrats on a nice 3rd place win!
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Date: 3/12/2016 1:40:00 AM
Ahhh, the heavens and a new star, what could be more poetic Nette! #7
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Date: 3/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Excellent nova and bloom. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:38:00 AM
YES! Love it ... CayCay
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Date: 3/11/2016 5:40:00 AM
I really loved this Nette beautifully done on one of my favourite topics too, Brava ! And good luck in the comp !! #7 Love Jayne x
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Date: 3/11/2016 12:09:00 AM
Fine acrostic here. I liked the last line a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/10/2016 10:27:00 PM
Majestic view of cosmic delight we sometimes take for granted. You leave me breathless and in awe of your outstanding poem!
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Date: 3/10/2016 7:38:00 PM
Love your astronomy writes nette... lovely
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Date: 3/10/2016 1:43:00 PM
One star can do miracles and allow us to breathtakingly savor the beauty of life.Marvelous gem of poem like no other!
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Date: 3/10/2016 1:11:00 PM
Star gazing can indeed be very breathtaking. Love your interpretation, nette. Peace my lady:)
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