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Breathtaking Beauty

Beauty in her, binds me whole-
retained and caged she fills my soul,
enchanted by her beauteous grace
absorbed in her thoughts I yearn an embrace,
the charm she exudes is ravishing
her hypnotic hold on me is mesmerizing ,
transfixed I am lost to the radiance in her 
astonished under her spell I do not stir,
kindling my sprits she leaves me spellbound 
intoxicated by her presence  I am astound,
natural bewitching beauty’s rapture I immerse
God Thank You, for stunning us with a star studded universe.


11-Mar-2016
Contest: Breathtaking
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/15/2016 6:00:00 PM Sathya Babu, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 3/14/2016 12:56:00 AM Congratulations Sathya: At first I thought you were describing a woman. Nice personification of the universe. Best, SuZ Login to Reply Sathya Babu Date: 3/14/2016 1:46:00 AM Thanks Suz........Glad to know you liked this twist in personification....:-)

Sam Jameson Date: 3/13/2016 4:17:00 PM Nice reveal at the end, Sathya-- congrats on your placement with this work! Login to Reply Sathya Babu Date: 3/13/2016 8:11:00 PM LOL..Thanks for your nice words............wanted to have some fun Sam. Thanks Again

John Hamilton Date: 3/13/2016 2:03:00 PM Great acrostic poem, Sathya, it was not a rhyming acrostic I was looking for this time but still was well done. Thanks for your entry! Login to Reply Sathya Babu Date: 3/13/2016 8:09:00 PM Thanks for the placement....OK I missed somehow that this shd be non-rhyming poem.......It was a pleasure participating. Thanks You Again...:-)