Sathya Babu Poet Acrostic

Breathtaking Beauty

Beauty in her, binds me whole-
retained and caged she fills my soul,
enchanted by her beauteous grace
absorbed in her thoughts I yearn an embrace,
the charm she exudes is ravishing
her hypnotic hold on me is mesmerizing ,
transfixed I am lost to the radiance in her 
astonished under her spell I do not stir,
kindling my sprits she leaves me spellbound 
intoxicated by her presence  I am astound,
natural bewitching beauty’s rapture I immerse
God Thank You, for stunning us with a star studded universe.


11-Mar-2016
Contest: Breathtaking
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 6:00 PM Sathya Babu, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA

Suzanne Delaney March 14, 2016 at 12:56 AM Congratulations Sathya: At first I thought you were describing a woman. Nice personification of the universe. Best, SuZ Sathya Babu March 14, 2016 at 1:46 AM Thanks Suz........Glad to know you liked this twist in personification....:-)

Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 4:17 PM Nice reveal at the end, Sathya-- congrats on your placement with this work! Sathya Babu March 13, 2016 at 8:11 PM LOL..Thanks for your nice words............wanted to have some fun Sam. Thanks Again

John Hamilton March 13, 2016 at 2:03 PM Great acrostic poem, Sathya, it was not a rhyming acrostic I was looking for this time but still was well done. Thanks for your entry! Sathya Babu March 13, 2016 at 8:09 PM Thanks for the placement....OK I missed somehow that this shd be non-rhyming poem.......It was a pleasure participating. Thanks You Again...:-)