Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Acrostic

Breathtaking

Breathtaking 






Before I could see the glitter of rising sun,
Rays of his love had blinded my vision,
Enraged tides constantly swayed my thoughts,
As crescendo of rhyming beats rose high,
Trusted promises that drummed into temper,
Head could merely record songs of passion
Till plucked strings of violin were put to rest.
And there I was pondering, sitting aloof,
Kindness having walked all through the rough, 
Is there a chance to relive if wrongs undone,
No matter how breathtaking the rope walks seem,
Gifts of fortune can't eclipse a shattered dream.




Written March 11th, 2016
For contest by John Hamilton 

Entered for "100 in a row- 15 contest" by PD A

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Beautiful Scars September 25, 2016 at 7:16 PM Beautiful Dr. Upma, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Poet Destroyer A September 24, 2016 at 9:47 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Janice Canerdy March 16, 2016 at 8:37 AM Excellent--congrats on your win! Janice

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 6:00 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA

Sathya Babu March 13, 2016 at 9:16 PM Dr.Upma.....Very nice write...Many Congrats on this WIN........

Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 4:14 PM I love the close of the final two lines Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your placement with this work, very nice.

John Hamilton March 13, 2016 at 1:56 PM Congrats Upma on your fine win! Well done! Love the deep meaning last two lines just great!John

Sandra Haight March 13, 2016 at 10:25 AM So nicely written with powerful thoughts, D. Upma. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2016 at 8:55 PM wow, some strong thoughts in this one! Written with passion!

Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 6:37 PM Upma, a very nice write, best of luck in the contest, 7 ~

CayCay Godwin March 11, 2016 at 10:10 AM Lovely write - deep and an enjoyable read. You have many beautiful thoughts in many lines that thrilled the poet in me. All the best ... CayCay

Daniel Turner March 11, 2016 at 7:56 AM Love your interpretation, Upma. Like my old poem states. It's the difference that we seek. Exceptional! Peace Doc and have a great day:)