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Breathtaking

Beauty, splendrously attractive,
Ravishing and radiant,
Engages all my senses
As I open garden gate.

Trees, vying for attention,
Have resplendent, springtime wear
That dispatches sweet perfumery,
Attracting bees to everywhere.

Knowing I must mind my manners, since
I have entered Paradise,
Noting all the fresh spring greenery
Giving thanks for world so nice.

Written: 3/10/16

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Date: 3/11/2016 10:30:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Joyce. All the best in the contest ... CayCay
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Date: 3/10/2016 5:31:00 PM
Joyce, you never fail me. Your poems are a breath of fresh air. Nothing says breathtaking like springtime. Peace to you young lady:)
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Date: 3/10/2016 4:51:00 PM
Joyce, this is a beautiful way to do the acrostic. I truly enjoyed the light and serene feel to this piece. :) Great write.
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