Breathtaking

Bus stop was the place where the intrigued eyes met
Romancing the atmosphere without uttering a single word
Enacting a introduction to two lonely strangers that feels
A calid embrace without touching any part of their skins 
Taking away the fears and disillusions from the far past
Holding a desire that the magical moment lasts forever 
Telling to the mind if it is a sweet dream or an actuality
Ablazing the emotions like a red lava volcano in eruption
Knowing that a decision should be made in a quick second
Inspiring the exchange of phone numbers to a future meeting
Navigating in unknown waters waiting to be further explored 
Guaranteeing that the future holds a blissful union of two souls 




For Breathtaking Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Fourth Place
3-10-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 15, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Nayda, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Thank you Linda
Hamilton Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Congrats Nayda on your fine placement in my contest. Thanks for your entry! John
Negron Flores Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Thank you John. It was an excellent contest
Scars Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Nayda, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 12:50 PM
Thank you
Godwin Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Herman's Hermits? Bus stop song? Do you remember / know that group / song? The first few lines took me there. I enjoyed reading your take on this Acrostic - original and attention holding, it should fare well. All the best ... CayCay
Negron Flores Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Thank you CayCay
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