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Beholding the golden skies of each new honeyed dawn makes me Rejoice to know I shall never bear witness to two that are tantamount. Each time the flaming sun dips beneath the sea when setting, I am Astounded and completely in awe of each breathtaking experience. These daily interludes are the precious gifts of our loving Father. His remarkable creations, in all facets of life are joyous to my heart. Traversing the rolling rapids in the depth of the Grand Canyon, or Ascending the heights to reach the crest of a snow-capped mountain Knoll, there lays before my eyes all the new vistas I've yet to explore. I anticipate with reverence having my breath taken away even more. New and wondrous visions will be restored to us on Earth one day. Glorious and breathtaking sights that will surely take my breath away. March 9th, 2016

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Sathya Babu

Date: 3/13/2016 9:07:00 PM

Lin..very nice poem...ending on a good hope. I liked it... Congratulations on your WIN

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/13/2016 4:05:00 PM

Reminding us that there is always more to come-- to appreciate every ounce of beauty. A truthful write, Lin..I enjoyed the read, thank you...and congrats on placement :)

Lu Loo

Date: 3/13/2016 12:43:00 PM

Lin I love this line..."His remarkable creations, in all facets of life are joyous to my heart." A wonderful acrostic, and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/13/2016 10:27:00 AM

Wonderful imagery and spiritual thoughts, Lin. I really enjoyed your Acrostic. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra.

John Hamilton

Date: 3/12/2016 10:49:00 PM

Just great Lin! congrats on your 3rd place win, very beautifully conveyed the imagery of creation, and our hope for paradise to come. Thanks for your entry! John

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 10:31:00 AM

thank you, John

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/11/2016 10:53:00 AM

YES - well done, Lin. Just beautiful and uplifting ... CayCay

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, CayCay.

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/10/2016 12:38:00 AM

Breathtaking!!!...(:^WW^:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/10/2016 2:58:00 AM

Your one word comment is the best you could've written. Thank you ~

Jan Allison

Date: 3/9/2016 4:44:00 PM

wonderful imagery in your acrostic Lin good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 3/9/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/9/2016 3:57:00 PM

Stunning imagery Lin that goes so well with the photo you chose. I loved the spiritual passion. Just beautiful! I am still writing mine. Hope I can enter it in time. #7

Lin Lane
Date: 3/9/2016 4:15:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Connie. Get on it! lol I have faith in you.

Gail Foster

Date: 3/9/2016 3:23:00 PM

That's lovely, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/9/2016 4:14:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gail.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/9/2016 1:01:00 PM

Perhaps someday we shall all reach that mountaintop. Beautiful write from the heart. Peace my dear, Peaches:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/9/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thank you very much, Danny.