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Waterfall Hopetoun Falls Aire River Otway Forest Australia

- Breathtaking -

Beautiful forest from a fairy tale in green
A waterfall wild, beautiful, cascading veils true and clean
Like a royal palace - sparkling in 24-carat gold
Nature in its natural look, wonderful to behold

Hunting and seeking the perfect, far away
A polished diamond, you will definitely find someday
In September mother nature wear
a comfortable atmosphere, which glows in the air





15/09/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Picturesque Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
3rd place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Blodgett Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:19 PM
Simply beautiful. Lonna
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 6:11 AM
- Many thanks Lonna, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Anne-lise congratulations on your win in the contest with this breathless poem!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:59 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Lovely rhyme ... A joy to read, Sunshine ... Congratulations on your placement ...
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:55 AM
- Thanks for your congratulations and your comment, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:29 AM
This is just beautiful Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:54 AM
- Thanks for your congratulations and your comment, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 10:41 PM
Great poem, Sunshine, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:53 AM
- Many thanks for my 3rd place on your winning list - A beautiful picture you chose for this contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sietesantos Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 1:46 PM
So beautiful with exquisite imagery! Bravo! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 1:49 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 1:34 AM
Beautiful and so tender. I love it. Blessings and best for winning the contest :)
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 4:56 AM
- Regina, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Beautiful poem Anne-Lise--pure gold.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 4:55 AM
- Many thanks Vijay, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:49 PM
perfect title for this piece, your words describe a breathtaking scene, i enjoyed the beauty through your pen :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 4:54 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Nice one Anne-Lise, bringing out the beauties of the season. Poetry hugs,Gordon
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 4:54 AM
- Gordon, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Picturesque indeed! Reads like a song.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 4:53 AM
- Many thanks Sunlite, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 4:29 PM
Anne-Lise, this is lovely for the contest, I like it a lot.. btw... I sent you a soupmail
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 4:52 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, W.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 2:07 PM
A lovely write...Nature is beautiful
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 2:10 PM
- Thank you very much, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. Being a country girl and a lover of Nature this one touches me deeply. Great job. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 1:45 PM
- I struggle with rhymes in English ... glad you enjoy it, thank you very much, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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