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Breathless Moments

Barely six and the bustle winds through depths of lost descent where reality hunts the night dreaming of incoherent content here dusk drifts off ever deep butterfly float on off to sleep in wings of the dormant pine almost silently still, she weeps but all I hear are angelic voices begging on moonbeams to fly breathless meaningful moments singing in every teardrop cried vous avez pris mon souffle as I placed my hands upon her heart a path opened to intimate ardor and a pleasingly inauspicious start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/25/2017 12:26:00 PM
You rock Tim!
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Date: 10/24/2017 1:48:00 PM
This is very, very lovely Tim! A painting expressed in words! : )
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Date: 10/24/2017 6:55:00 AM
Hey Timmy , I've been following you for about 3 yrs now----not stalking---but in a good way. Your ability to reach the reader and identify with the emotional side of almost any one is expanding rapidly. Capturing and holding the reader, in my opinion is essentially important, but not disappointing the reader at the "La Fin" is imperative , n'est-ce pas, Keep writing my friend.
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Date: 10/23/2017 6:48:00 PM
oohhh, that second half. It just got better and better. Beautiful!
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Date: 10/23/2017 5:00:00 PM
another affectionate read, tim.. i am breathless!..huggs
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:36:00 PM
Takes my breath away, another beautiful romantic write Tim!
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Date: 10/23/2017 2:32:00 PM
Hands upon my heart would take my breath away, too. Your second to last verse is beyond lovely, Tim.
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