Regina Mcintosh Poet Haiku

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Breathless Encounters

laughter breaks silence
   coloring worlds in kindness
      lingering on lips? a kiss

      breathing dreams awake
   will love like this ever fade?
joy lights up the dance of life





Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: William Kekaula
I used HMS Syllable counter
July 11, 2021

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Sam Kauffman July 19, 2021 at 10:24 AM Oh, Gina, this literally dances with the joy of love. Wonderful write. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Sending you blessings of joy.

Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2021 at 1:50 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/fun write and picture. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings..........

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2021 at 1:24 PM Love it, Regina! Congratulations!

Mystic Rose Rose July 17, 2021 at 10:10 AM this is so well done Congrats Gina !

Christuraj Alex July 17, 2021 at 12:24 AM Wonderful Creation. Congratulations!

William Kelii Kekaula July 16, 2021 at 11:11 PM Loving the photo that expounds the imagery, even so, it stands by its own just fine, Gina, and such a dramatic closing statement. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha!

Paghunda Zahid July 12, 2021 at 5:30 AM Short and sweet... You penned it so well. I hope it will be placed in the contest

Gregory Richard Barden July 12, 2021 at 12:11 AM Beautiful brevity and expression ... "the dance of life", indeed! We should all learn the steps, and spend them in joy! Excellent.