Breathless Encounters

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laughter breaks silence coloring worlds in kindness lingering on lips? a kiss breathing dreams awake will love like this ever fade? joy lights up the dance of life Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula I used HMS Syllable counter July 11, 2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2021 10:24:00 AM

Oh, Gina, this literally dances with the joy of love. Wonderful write. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Sending you blessings of joy.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/17/2021 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/fun write and picture. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings..........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2021 1:24:00 PM

Love it, Regina! Congratulations!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/17/2021 10:10:00 AM

this is so well done Congrats Gina !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/17/2021 12:24:00 AM

Wonderful Creation. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/16/2021 11:11:00 PM

Loving the photo that expounds the imagery, even so, it stands by its own just fine, Gina, and such a dramatic closing statement. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/12/2021 5:30:00 AM

Short and sweet... You penned it so well. I hope it will be placed in the contest

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/12/2021 12:11:00 AM

Beautiful brevity and expression ... "the dance of life", indeed! We should all learn the steps, and spend them in joy! Excellent.