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6/5/2026 for 2026-06-02 Breathless Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Hiking Duck Pass to Duck Lake

Breathless

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." ~ Maya Angelou   

A lake view emerging from a mountain pass,
turquoise water reflecting the sun like glass -
a view of heaven; 

butter-fingered hands that missed,
a football to the stomach and a fist -
countless bullies (six or seven);

on a prairie, soaking in some peace,
hearing honking of Canadian geese -
moving with the seasons; 

the girl next door, a beautiful bride,
several of the wedding guests cried - 
for different reasons.
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Kendrick Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 1:36 PM
Creative winning work. I am delighted it was on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest, David. Way to go. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 9:51 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Breathless" is a lovely write with a great picture/quote. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Crandall Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:24 AM
Thanks, Paula!
La France Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 2:54 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my Breathless contest with your beautifully penned poem, I loved your quote and image~
Crandall Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Thanks, Constance! I enjoyed it.
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