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The tones of skin are but outer layers of continental pigments designed by a Source, yet we loathe colored people and have less fondness for the minority of earth- brothers who feel, writhe, and dream the way we do...it's neither Asian eyes, Hispanic features, nor black hands. We may be color-blinded by prejudice borne from some lost gratitude of rightful co-existence, and to honor the inner beauty of one race--mankind. I look at a flower blooming into different kinds of rich shades: and oh how we forget that human tints combined are far more glittering than all pallets of this universe: All of us breathe the same air, polluted foggy, and clear...tell me please, what makes our neighbors choke the light off when darkness needs a sliver of horizon's glint? I ask because because I don't know why... Richard Lamoureux's Contest I Can't Breathe 6/12/2020

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Date: 6/17/2020 6:51:00 AM
Powerful and thought provoking words Nette. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/16/2020 6:58:00 AM
Nette, raising the right questions. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 6/15/2020 7:48:00 AM
A big big congratulations on your win. this is beautifully written and full of awesome lines.
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:50:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats on your win Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/13/2020 1:50:00 PM
It has always fascinated me that children do not distinguish Asian eyes, skin colour, nor even sex when choosing playmates until parents or teachers show their disapproval! Well said! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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