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breathing an evening song

Restful twilight shades This side of the spinning earth And the stars awaken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/22/2012 3:37:00 PM
Evocative and complete, which many haikus are not. The last line is pure gold!
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Jennifer Cahill
Date: 4/22/2012 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Mike. I am especially flattered by your words.
Date: 4/22/2012 3:20:00 PM
I like it!! Its tranquility brought a smile and a lift to my heart..Thanks for sharing Jennifer... Love Diana
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Jennifer Cahill
Date: 4/22/2012 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Daina. I am usually shy about responding to comments and/ or critiquing other poets' work, but I am flattered and felt that I should starting expressing my appreciation when others comment on my work.