Breathe, Keep Moving

Dreaded dream killer
A freight train loaded with pain
Reduces heart to hope,
Though surviving, don't be fooled
To live, you've gotta move
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Withee Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Very nice.
Miljkovic Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Thanks :) Just a friendly reminder living isn't sitting on our asses hoping for the best :D
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