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Breathe For Me

Breathe for me
when I can’t perceive
this hope before my eyes
I’m stuck inside
wrapped in shadows
but never realized
Darkness lies on the inside
and everywhere, it’s true
but truth remains within each breath

I swear I’ll breathe for you

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Heidi Sands Date: 9/29/2019 12:03:00 AM I love this poem! I can feel it and understand it too. :) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/29/2019 12:25:00 AM I am so pleased to know this. Thank you, Heidi :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/18/2019 3:45:00 PM So beautiful... Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/18/2019 9:53:00 PM Thank you ~

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/16/2019 9:37:00 PM This is some deep breathing! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/16/2019 10:38:00 PM Tell me about it! lol ;) Thank you for stopping by, Gershon :)

Pat Adams Date: 9/14/2019 8:09:00 PM This kind of makes me a little anxious for some reason. A FAV for me. Really very well done!!.......pat Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/14/2019 9:55:00 PM No worries, mate. All is good ~ Sometimes, though, it's good to know someone's got your back, especially when you think you have no one or anyone who really cares.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/14/2019 9:09:00 AM Yes, sometimes we need help breathing. Perhaps if you have been fortunate this all led to some heavy breathing or at least some mouth to mouth rececitation. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/14/2019 1:17:00 PM Lol. This was something a little different ;)

John Hamilton Date: 9/13/2019 6:23:00 PM Very nice...enjoyed! Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/14/2019 12:18:00 AM Thank you, John :)

Eric Ashford Date: 9/13/2019 7:18:00 AM Nice, neat poem, with a strong theme. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/13/2019 11:18:00 AM Thank you, Eric ~

Chris Green Date: 9/13/2019 7:17:00 AM Such a deeply beautiful and longing poem that breathes of the pain some feel inside but also adds a breath of hope at the end. I really loved this. It felt very good to read this morning. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/13/2019 11:17:00 AM Thank you so very much. I am very happy to know you understood and appreciated this.