Hello There Poet Rhyme

Breathe For Me

Breathe for me
when I can’t perceive
this hope before my eyes
I’m stuck inside
wrapped in shadows
but never realized
Darkness lies on the inside
and everywhere, it’s true
but truth remains within each breath

I swear I’ll breathe for you

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Heidi Sands September 29, 2019 at 12:03 AM I love this poem! I can feel it and understand it too. :) Hello There September 29, 2019 at 12:25 AM I am so pleased to know this. Thank you, Heidi :)

Charmaine Chircop September 18, 2019 at 3:45 PM So beautiful... Hello There September 18, 2019 at 9:53 PM Thank you ~

Gershon Wolf September 16, 2019 at 9:37 PM This is some deep breathing! ~ Gershon Hello There September 16, 2019 at 10:38 PM Tell me about it! lol ;) Thank you for stopping by, Gershon :)

Pat Adams September 14, 2019 at 8:09 PM This kind of makes me a little anxious for some reason. A FAV for me. Really very well done!!.......pat Hello There September 14, 2019 at 9:55 PM No worries, mate. All is good ~ Sometimes, though, it's good to know someone's got your back, especially when you think you have no one or anyone who really cares.

Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2019 at 9:09 AM Yes, sometimes we need help breathing. Perhaps if you have been fortunate this all led to some heavy breathing or at least some mouth to mouth rececitation. Hello There September 14, 2019 at 1:17 PM Lol. This was something a little different ;)

John Hamilton September 13, 2019 at 6:23 PM Very nice...enjoyed! Hello There September 14, 2019 at 12:18 AM Thank you, John :)

Eric Ashford September 13, 2019 at 7:18 AM Nice, neat poem, with a strong theme. Hello There September 13, 2019 at 11:18 AM Thank you, Eric ~

Chris Green September 13, 2019 at 7:17 AM Such a deeply beautiful and longing poem that breathes of the pain some feel inside but also adds a breath of hope at the end. I really loved this. It felt very good to read this morning. Hello There September 13, 2019 at 11:17 AM Thank you so very much. I am very happy to know you understood and appreciated this.