Breathe Awhile

Just walk a little slow, breathe awhile
Feel the breeze, come out of exile.

6.2.22 
Sponsor: L.MILTON HANKINS
Contest Name: Your Best Rhyming Couplet #4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Faulkner Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Hi Carol, like how you link a slow walk and feeling the breeze to coming out of exile, I can relate to that~
Mitra Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 2:02 AM
Hi Michelle .....both a mood elevator.....Thanks, much love :)
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